Reviews for The art of pain
Jounouchi123 chapter 6 . 2/7/2016
Hiii It is a great chapter sorry it took me so long to read it but I had no time u know, the work and stuff but today is off so I can do whatever I want (ω) I thought perhaps it would be a better idea if you split this chapter into two, because it was hard reading it for it being so long, it is good to have a chapter this long, btw english is my second language that's why I found it too long but anyway I have read it all hehhehe it is my fav story afterall~

And yes please make another story, I need more of GomxKagami I need a lot and Omg Haizaki will show! :S I hope nothing happenes to kagamichii uhhmmm the chapter was reallly goood they all like kagami we need more I hope to see more of that if u decided to write another sequel! gd luck!
KittylovesLove chapter 2 . 11/9/2015
I like it thought I'm not a big fan of was quiet interesting, up the good work. :3
KittylovesLove chapter 1 . 11/9/2015
I like how you open up the begging. :3 So far I think it's good._
Kagamicchi30 chapter 6 . 8/24/2015
Oh my gosh, a sequel for this story sounds awesome!
And Haizaki makes another appearance! Hopefully he isn't such an asshole this time..I'm hoping the GoM at least throw a couple of punches at Haizaki once they see him again!
I absolutely love GoM x Kagami! This was a great fanfiction to read! I can't wait to read more of your amazing works!

Read you soon! (Ha! See what I did there? I'm a genius...Nuff said.)
liluvia chapter 6 . 8/22/2015
Hi !

I loved your fanfiction so much ! Hehe, Kagami really is the best, right ? Even though I don't even know why I love him so much.

Anyway, I also loved how you dealt with the subject of rape, it's not easy but in my opinion you totally succeeded. It was so realistic, so painful and so – so good, yeah. Moving, really. I wanted to cry every time because of Kagami ! My favorite chapter is the fifth (because of the thing with the sweat, you know, it totally amazed me). And also the fact that Kagami was torn between his crave and his disgust for touch – and how he looked for sick pleasure after that by sleeping with other people – and even how he felt pleasure while Haizaki raped him and the guilt and the horror that followed. Not that I think rape!stories are sexy or something like that ! (Err, hell no !). I just thought it was extremely realistic this way. Really, it was a good job !

Did you make some research on the net to know how victim of rapes react after the trauma – and during the trauma ? The psychologist was good too. And so was Himuro ! (He's a cute and caring big brother...).

Hum, but there are a few errors I think – like this stuff with the apostrophe for the possession. For example you wrote "Kagamis look fell..." instead of "Kagami's look fell..." (chapter 5), "Aomines messages" instead of "Aomine's messages" (chapter 5), etc. In fact, even the apostrophes are weird – do you use your phone for typing your stories or... ? Aah, and your hyphens were weird also, you have to let a gap before and after the hyphen. Like this : "In summer it was hot, the trains were hot, the streets were hot - everything was justt suffocating hot and dry", not "In summer it was hot, the trains were hot, the streets were hot-everything was just suffocating hot and dry" (chapter 5). And with Word you can make longer hyphens, like this : " – " instead of this: " - "... The former are used for the sentences while the latter for compound words.

... Yeah, I'm punctilious.

Hum... And that's all I think.

I'm maybe repeating myself, but : good job !

Lilu.

PS : I loved so much Aomine in the flashback in the sixth chapter ! Yeah, we all know he's a crybaby :D But Midorima was a bit disappointing... He's such a tsundere, hmph.

PS 2 : You're writing a sequel to this, aren't you ? I don't know what to think about it. On one hand I'm a super fan of Kagami/GoM (Kagami deserve aaaall the love in the world) but on the other hand, I think the end is perfect as it is. Maybe a sequel will just spoil everything... Hum. Just my point of view, though. Maybe you'll do something cool !
kroscetish chapter 6 . 8/19/2015
well yeah, so i haven't no login to my account so that i can put another review after reading this one. hehehe please make a sequel. i know i haven't read it yet but pls do a sequel. i really love kagami...
katie103 chapter 6 . 8/17/2015
This story was great and I appreciate you responding to me at the beginning of the chapter! I would love to see a sequel with more GOMXKagami if you have time and motivation to do it!
Mr. Absolute chapter 6 . 8/16/2015
That was such a beautiful story! I loved it! Well done my friend!
Setelah Sekolah chapter 6 . 8/18/2015
Awww I'm glad that Kagami get happiness in the end.../
And yes if you're gonna a write sequel I'm gonna read again from you :3
EminaRukiax chapter 6 . 8/17/2015
Oh yes please! Please make a sequel! I also ship GoMKaga so hard! Kagami is their ultimate uke tenshi! Argggh! I really love this story very much! Thank you for the fanfic!
Aira Aura chapter 6 . 8/17/2015
I kinda feel sorry for Haizaki... I don't think he that bad... he also have a good side...
He just can't control his feeling...
Mr. Absolute chapter 3 . 8/6/2015
Oh, yes. I love this.
Mr. Absolute chapter 2 . 8/6/2015
I think Kagami was just a bit too weak here, but I guess I could understand considering what happened to him, but otherwise it was enjoyable to read.
Guest chapter 5 . 7/7/2015
This a very emotional story and I love it! Keep up the good work :)
kroscetish chapter 5 . 7/4/2015
eeeehhhh...glad that he went to some specialist. everything will be ok kagami! This is a great chapter as it tackles about kagami's hardships regarding that particular incident. hope to see another chapter soon.
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