I find this chapter very depressing, it was like they were saying goodbye to each other, I don't like it.

In response to your AN- don't get bogged down by the canon, forget it. This is an AU, I'd rather read your story.

Will you be back to finish this? I feel like it's no where near the end as this is no where near the description of juice & Ollie not giving up easy as 1st love dies hard.

I have no idea why Tara would just go in & confront Kohn & expect it to go smoothly. Seems like a really dumb move.

I'm feeling like there's not going to be a happy ending for juice & Ollie.

Yep, didn't see that coming at all. Your AN has me worried that you've changed the end.

I like that ollies exploring her feelings on her divided heart& talking to Tara about it.

This is a crazy love triangle. It's too tense, it makes me anxious to read it.

I love that he bought the sculpture of them not knowing that's what it was, but that he was drawn to it & now she realizes that he had it all along. Now she had to fix "us," them.

There's only 6 chapters left, I'm not sure it moves on from here.

This Yvonne just seems to be too much, she wants something Juice can't give her, begging for it makes her so desperate.

I like that Abels finally here, I hope we can finally have Jax & Tara time.

The Tara/Ollie/Opie phone call was too funny!

Reading Ollie & Juices exchange just made me very sad for Juice, like heartbreakingly sad. If he wouldn't have been such a jerk in the bathroom this would've been him, he's just starting to realize that.

I'm glad she's home, but not so much being in love with Opie

I hate Kohn, I hope Juice does some real damage! Jax is going to be mad that the group all knew except him.

I love that Juice dropped the cereal, he thought she was saying she needed him, broke my heart a little. I like that he sent Opie to NYC, it shows he loves her.

Oh boy, I'm glad they're waiting.

I really like the open discussion with Opie & Ollie, & I like that it didn't get sexual. They're really talking about crossing a line that no matter what they say will change things.

I'm disappointed that Juice didn't come, but I really like the message he left & the fact that she listened to it twice then saved it.

I love what the art assistant said about Opie, too funny. I'm glad he came.

It seemed weird with Ben there & him talking about a baby with the new wife. It made me wonder if maybe Ollie couldn't have kids?

I really like the structure of this chapter! My favorite line is "he imagined the small of her back would look by candlelight- just before he tasted it." Awesome line full of imagery!

Of course I kind of which all these conversations were with Juice, lol.