Reviews for Another Nakama IV
Guest chapter 9 . 6/3/2019
The other person was wrong though, the more correct term is Gary Stu. It describes your character perfectly. He's superior in Luffy in every way, better swordsman than Zoro, more durable than him and Sanji, has a power that doesn't belong, trained by Whitebeard, etc.. I could go on and on.

I'll say as well that canon following is just unoriginal. There's no major changes that I've seen whatsoever. You've literally copied scenes from detail down to dialogue in the manga/dub.

Another problem was how you wrote the relationship. It's literally a never ending back and forth of:
"ok they're together"
"no wait no they're not"
"never mind, see how they love each other"
"wait no, they now hate each other's guts"
"made up now, they're a couple"
And you say this would've continued this until *after* the time skip? Jesus. There's a difference between slow-burn and whatever you were doing.

Another was how much of a condescending ass he was. I don't need to explain this. The "rules/laws of anime"? What the fuck was that? Why does he have to mock the series itself to its own characters?

The next is my favorite. How old were you when you wrote this? 13? Were you single as well? It seemed that you had to be desperate to do the "every female wants to fuck my oc" trope. I honestly believe that this entire fanfic is your self insert story/fantasy. Wish fulfillment is quite the strong suit of yours.

Last is one that puzzles me: the popularity. I've seen your profile on DeviantArt. The drawings you've done. The ones you've commissioned. And even most bizarre, the rather large amount of gift art that somehow kept popping up. Out of all the stories at the time, this was the one to get fan art, of course you paid for most of them, but still. People really love their wish fulfillment, don't they.

That's all I feel like saying. If it hasn't been clear, I'm not a fan of you. I'm very glad you're gone and your Gary Stu/obvious self-insert story will never be continued. In the off chance you do feel like returning, consider this; it took you six years to reach this point. Think how long it'll take to even get to the timeskip.

Please never come back.
Ikousetsu chapter 7 . 12/29/2017
All these games are annoying. I would have lost my patience with them and if i was in a crew that was against those foxes. I would of just kill them (Do not care if i Lost honor for it)
Nightfire1023 chapter 1 . 5/24/2017
I think you should at least try to continue this when you have time.
darthrevan.B-312 chapter 9 . 5/19/2017
Its sad that your ending the story but i under stand why, life can usually be hectic at time and when you no longer want to work on a project it can be hard to continue so I'm note made that you stop but i hope you will still write fan fictions because your a grate writer and hope to see more of your writing and may god bless your in life to come. ps i have a quentin for you if you still plan to write have you that of jojo's bizarre adventure it is fun whet bizarre(ha puns)and awesome at time so maybe you can do one on it its up to you if you do or not but i now its will be grate and i whood read it any day of the week.
creativesm75 chapter 8 . 1/26/2017
good. too bad, you abandoned this.
mslmob12 chapter 9 . 9/26/2016
What are the reactions to the RINA pairing when everyone arrives at Sabaody? We know they found out but not when they finally see it with their own eyes.
Namuun0914 chapter 9 . 8/17/2016
Please update or continue this please it's soooooooo gooooooooood
Anonymous ideas chapter 9 . 7/25/2016
Mate, I understand how it can be difficult to find time to write when your busy with work and your personal life, but that doesn't mean you should just give up. Your stories are some of the best I have ever seen on this site, every chapter just drawing you in. And now, you have crushed the hearts of so many of your fans.

I'm not saying you should update every few days or weeks like most others. I'm just saying that if you ever have a little time to yourself, you could slowly make touches on the story. Many other authors do the same, like Ultimate10 or Theboblinator.

Just please, reconsider abandoning all this.
Guest chapter 9 . 7/24/2016
One less shitty Gary Stu story in the world.
namina88 chapter 9 . 7/12/2016
I'll miss this story :'(
Goodbye and goodluck for you :)
Guest chapter 9 . 7/10/2016
How does Ricky feel about Law and their pirate alliance?
Guest chapter 9 . 7/10/2016
What's Ricky and Nami's first date like?
Guest chapter 9 . 7/10/2016
Did Ricky ever lose control of the Red Eye during the Whitebeard War?
Guest chapter 9 . 7/10/2016
Does Ricky fight the PX5 along with the other Strawhats? Did he get hurt?
Guest chapter 9 . 7/10/2016
Is Rucky the first person Kuma sends away on Saobody? What were the reactions of those that saw it happen?
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