Was totally into your story, cuz let's be honest, there just aren't enough Ilona-centric stories. But as an unashamed Gideon fangirl, I gotta say the ending seriously disillusioned me. Still, great story! Til ya know... That part...

Awesome man do continue

Holy crap, that was amazing. Its so cool reading the scenes and stuff. Kudos, mate

I honestly should have seen that coming with how the trailer was, but it took me by surprise, to be honest! That was slightly depressing with everyone dying lol. But very well written! I really liked this! Awesome job :)

Story is good. If you want to update this, better watch out for typos.