agh ouch... my heart hurts huhuhu this could be legit mannn

Aw you should make more chapters of it its really good. To bad this didn't happen in the anime or manga. :(

Aw! I didn't know I inpsired you! That's so sweet my darling Gecko-chan! Ahem, onto my usual critique. Why does Allen have white hair? That doesn't happen until much later. At this point hair should be brownish reddish (auburn?). How does he get turned into a kid? Nice job! Loved it, as usual! See ya later!

-Vetus

Omg the feels! This is the best NeahXAllen story I have ever read. So sad! I loved it, so thanks for writing! Well I always love your stories so... :)