| Reviews for His Golden Haze Part I |
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  Cruel Reader chapter 6 . 1/2/2017 I hate bella in this chapter she had no reason to put her hands on jacob. if I were jacob I would not be as easy going. |
 QuinSFA chapter 6 . 3/3/2016 You have a very pleasing writingstyle. But the pace of the story is just a bit to fast for me. All in all its an ok story for your first time writing. |
| Guest chapter 40 . 10/27/2015 I so love part on can't wait to read part two. |
| sindhura chapter 40 . 10/27/2015 I really enjoyed reading it! I can't wait for part 2! |
| Peaches318 chapter 37 . 10/3/2015 So glad that the visit didn't turn into a blood bath. I so love this little family together. I can't wait to read about the trials and tribulations with Jay once he gets older and shifts. Update soon! |
| Peaches318 chapter 36 . 9/29/2015 The Volturi always try to ruin everything. They have never seen the love of a mother and father. I hope for their sake that they listen to Jake and Ness! |
| Anne Shirley Cullen chapter 36 . 9/26/2015 ooh looking forward the next chapter. |
| lytebrytehybrid88 chapter 36 . 9/26/2015 I feel like the end of part one is gonna have their little family hiding out unsure of who's okay or not for years and that some will be lost trying to protect them. So please no original pack members dying cause most of them have imprints who'll be lost without them and it will hurt their kids too. |
| Anne Shirley Cullen chapter 35 . 9/25/2015 love it |
| Anne Shirley Cullen chapter 34 . 9/12/2015 ooh so love it , can't wait till part two. |
| Anne Shirley Cullen chapter 33 . 9/12/2015 yeah! Can't wait, in my personal opinion I hate the intial name thing. For the long time i never called my god brother his intial name because he wasn't a junior. I called him R2 also when he was a baby he sounded like R2-D2. |
| Peaches318 chapter 33 . 9/12/2015 Awwww we have EJ! I'm so happy! That's going to be one spoiled baby. Update soon please. |
| Peaches318 chapter 32 . 9/10/2015 I'm so excited that we are getting closer to seeing Baby Black. Update soon! |
| Anne Shirley Cullen chapter 32 . 9/7/2015 love this chapter |
| Peaches318 chapter 31 . 9/5/2015 Jake is so cute as a father! I can't wait to see him and Nessie with their bundle of joy! |
