Minerva, darling, that was probably the hottest make-out session you will ever see, so dont go fainting on us!

LUCY! humph, no need to tell lies

Truley and Royally screwed.

Pourquoi les meilleures histoires ne sont jamais terminées, c'est assez frustrant de se dire qu'on ne connaîtra probablement jamais la fin. Dommage

I love the concept but I think this story needs rewritten.

UPDATE PLEASE

hex my curiosity, to the next chapter.

I love the story please update soon. Want to read what happens next. How are you doing?

I hope that you will come back to this. It has been a fun story. :)
There are things that I am wondering about. What about Harry's things - his invisibility cloak, map, photo album, broom and Hedwig? Will he be able to find out about being Sirius' heir? Will he find out about his potter heritage? Could he call Dobby to get his possessions, or could one of his adult friends help? What will Hermione's reaction be? Will her love of authority override her love of her best friend? Or, will she join him? What about the twins? How will Neville take the news? Will Dumbles be thwarted?

I like this new style. :)

This has been a fun story. I loved McGonagall's last minute plan. Made me laugh.

..."savage manors"... grin So, I never knew Voldy's home could be so ferocious! But, how he acts, his manners - yes, I agree. ;)

just a typo - dinning room - dining room

Kindly separate your paragraphs. Not everyone has the eyesight that can take in that much information all at once.

again, not capitalising certain words... like Wormtail.

well, the only thing I would change is that you did not capitalise Harry and Potter in the disclaimer, other than that, decent job

Albus will never find harry potter or Severus snape.