Dude.

Dude, I love this.

You're making more, right? I really wanna see where this goes.

Also, holy shit. The beginning was. . . depressing. What the fuck happened?

This is pretty dark for a Sam & Max fic. I like that. We need more like this.

I also really like how you wrote Sam in here. He actually seems human and halfway decent.

Although, I doubt Max would be squeemish to blood. I mean, this IS Max we're talking about, you know.

Overall, I loved loved LOVED this. It's incredibly well-written, despite having one or two grammatical errors, and has amazing descriptions. Can't wait for the following chapters. :D

This is interesting. Certainly darker than I've seen Sam and Max, but retaining something of a sense of humour. Keep it up.

I like the look of this story a lot, and it's great to see people still posting Sam and Max stories on here. I can't wait to see the plot unfold, it looks like it's gonna be dark and gritty, which will be interesting to see with characters such as Sam and Max.

I'm looking forward to the next chapter, but please take your time if you need it. No need to rush things, am I right?

This is nice work, keep it up!

-V