It's a great story

an interesting story. Ashoka was my favorite character from the Clone Wars cartoon. i've only really seen the first few episodes of Rebels. there's nothing wrong with it, it just didn't keep my interest.

plus, the character Sabine kind of annoyed. not her attitude or anything, but the fact that they have her being a Mandalorian. Mandalorians are supposed to be bad*** warriors, not kids that tag **** for fun.

Nice refernce to tale of a togruta at the end there

Que genial final. Que extraordinaria historia. Genial!

Hello Norik,

You are a wonderful writer and I love reading your stories. The ending was rather intriguing and I am curious if there is another chapter in there about the secret Jedi cell.
I was hoping for an appearance by Lux but Ahsoka seems quite proud of her Togruta roots.
I don't know what rumors there are, other than Barriss possibly being the new Inquisitor, so you have probably heard something I haven't. That may be a problem with fan fiction that those of us (me included) who like to write with the canon in mind are tied to a fickle wind.
Ditto you and David about Disney running their Star Wars Rebels to the sands of Mos Eisley. I'll just gave to wait and see.
Good Luck,
johnt

Good ending to the story. I wonder if the younger Togruta is Ahsoka's daughter. I agree with you over Rebels. I think they are going to make some bad decisions too.

Please update soon

Can you please make more chapters, don't just stop on the second chapter.

Please make more of this

Please make more chapters real soon

I loved it please
update soon

Please update soon

It's great story

please write more soon.

Hi Norik,

I really love this story. Keep up the good work. I will be interested in how Ahsoka and the crew get along. It was a little tense in the beginning.

johnt