This is my all-time favorite "first night" Kyalin fic out there ! I absolutely love it :))))

I wonder if she ran into Asami. Nice story!

that was amazingg

Lovely masterpiece.
Exactly what I think their relationship should be.
Great work.
Thanks for sharing!

So not enough, but at least there is.

Christ, this was terrific!

I love the backstory of Lin and Kya, and how they both endured a lot of expectations that might not have necessarily been foisted on them. Often I've watched Legend of Korra and wondered how the old team Avatar could acquire such baggage, and then pass it unwittingly on to their kids.

Anyway, this was breathtakingly beautiful, well written, and you threw in the perfect mix of humor, drama, and angst.

There just isn't enough Kyalin!

Great story, terrific job! :)

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Loved it!

OMG yes that was perfect! 10/10

This was so awesome! This story held my attention all the way to the end. I can't believe you don't have more views. You wrote them so well. Keep up the great work!

Nice read. I can totally see this happening between them.

My third time around reading this and still enjoyable :-)

This was just lovely. I adore Kya and Lin together and I hoped that they would connect in the series as well. Fanfiction and fembuck to the rescue. I really appreciate the way you portrayed them in this story. Great Job. I also liked your spin on their history together as well. Keep up the awesome writing.

Me gusto mucho la pareja de Kya y Lin hacen muy linda pareja la verdad, las tima que no fue mas largo este fic, pero bueno lo bueno dura poco, gracias por el fic :D

This was wonderful, I can't get enough of these two right now, and this was really cute and perfectly in character. :D

Great chapter, can't wait for more.