Well this is definitely something.

Interesting idea.

Make chapter 2 it is a Great start

Good story. Update plz

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So...are you EVER going to update this?

Interesting to say the least

Very interesting
Ps teach me the ways master ;D

Very interesting premise. Looking forward to future chapters.

AWESOME! :D I love this idea of yours! Looks like Gohan's going to be the new center of attention for two really horny twins! I'm already loving it, and I'm really looking forward to the next chapter too! _

Ooh, seems like a nice premise. Just watch out a bit on your grammar, some mistakes wormed their way into the story lol. Take some time and review the chapter after it's done, you may find some things you didn't think were there. Maybe use italics, or just speak in the past tense, when you want to do a flash back. Just seems weird when you put the "FLASHBACK" and "FLASHBACK END" for just one line. Messes up the fluency of the story, too. Well, hope you update and take this advice :D Can't wait for more.

NICE! :D