update update update~
I'm on my knees... I beg of you, pleeeaaaaassseeeee update

This is so cute. Can't wait for the next chapter! I didn't catch any spelling errors so 4/5 so far!
Awesome story (but I crave more detail/longer chapters. Ex: the courtroom scene could have had a lot more of Souls attraction towards Mama, which would have made it more humorous. Just little things like that. Don't get me wrong, I'm not hating on you or your story, but just a bit more detail can draw a reader in and make them become anxious for the next chapter. It gives us a better visual as to what you want us to see.)
I really liked how you described Soul's eyes! Very few people stray from the 'crimson' description. Looking forward to the next chapter!
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update please!

This is good and real interesting. I've noticed fanfics typically enjoy putting Soul and Maka into some type of business setting. This is real good though and I can't wait to see more of it.

Thanxs! :) :p ;)

heh. not bad. i'll stick n see how this work out XD

I like this story a lot so far, can't wait to read more!

This is a kool story and u should be updated!

U should totally update this is awesome!
Sorry my phone is stupid b lol

U should totally u

this is SHITE

This story is very promising so far. I love pretty much everything about it. Great writing style, nice, set-up, believable characters. The only thing that I didn't like as much was how Maka defeated Soul in court. It just seems that a great lawyer like him would read a contract thoroughly and not overlook something like that. But that might just be me being nitpicking. I love your story. I'm looking forward to the next chapter :)

I love it so far, can't wait for more!

Im sure this next chapter will be very long and up to par