i dont know if it's because i'm tired or what but... this is it, this the chapter that broke me to the first part,time record realy is an amazing but cruel innocence omg... but it's so cute and big, i'm melting and drowing at the same time, this isn't realy fair.
i realy thought it was going to end badly, i 'm kind of releaved too.

finaly, i'm more ready for this epilogue than i thought i was when i started reading this chapter.

i can't believe i missed 2 chapters !

for the 23: a lot of lovely headcanons! debates on if exorcist should have raw innocences fragments on them to increase the compatibles rates... i love that, it could put more stress on the characters and increase the angst. cruel but wouldn't be surprising.
gloves ! so cute, i bet miranda got realy good at sewing, and johnny may have teached her what are the good fabrics.
(also there have been a new exorcist in two years : timoty )
for the 24 : the concept of comfort sewing is just adorable! this chapter is just adorable, even when stuff such are allen's emprisonement and kanda's foolishness are mentioned it stiff is bright and positive !

can't wait for the next chapter, knowing that the end is sealed uuu

Marie's description of the different paces of life and relationships at the Order is interesting. I can see how that could be, with everyone traveling so much, especially before they got the Arc. I like the idea of the Order having a peaceful, if neglected, garden on the grounds. Although I have a hard time picturing where on that tiny cliff they put it.

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The stuff about pets at the Order is sad, but makes sense. It's too bad, I think a lot of the people there could benefit from having something to take care of (and remind them to take care of themselves) day to day. Getting the piano fixed is a nice idea. I wonder if it survived the later attacks? I kind of expected Marie to play something for Miranda on it a some point.

Oh my. With all the hubbub about the pickpocket, I wonder if Miranda ever got to buy her soap. I like how Marie is protective of Miranda and helps fix the situation, but in the end allows Miranda to handle the confrontation with the pickpocket herself. He helps, but doesn't make her helpless. It's really sweet. And now hopefully Miranda won't get harassed in the town anymore. Poor Miranda, she just seems to attract all sorts of negative attention.

I like that part of how their relationship grows is because Miranda is shy about meeting new people. It makes sense in terms of Miranda's personality and it seems like just the sort of thing Marie would be understanding about.

Fluff! This is a wonderful story. It never fails to make me feel happy and warm and fuzzy inside. Thank you so much for sharing it.

I really like this idea for how Miranda and Marie meet. It is very in keeping with their respective characters: Miranda gives it her all and does well, but exhaustion and klutziness get the better of her in the end; Marie stumbles upon someone in need of help and is more than willing to give it.

It's very like Miranda that her first concern once she understands what the situation is is whether she is in the way (taking up a needed bed). Poor dear. It's a tiny bit odd that the nurse is warning Miranda against getting that exhausted or else she /might/ fall asleep in a hallway, when they were just discussing the fact that Miranda /did/ fall asleep in a hallway the night before. But it doesn't really cause any issues with the overall narrative, so no matter.

Poor Miranda. You can really tell that not many people have treated he kindly before, if she thinks that a normal response to seeing someone sleeping in a hallway is to just leave them there.

The idea that Marie figures out emotions by picking up on vocal cues and changes in pulse rate is a very interesting one. It seem plausible that he could to that (especially with his headphones) and would certainly explain his uncanny ability to judge how people are doing (and to see past the emotional masks that a lot of characters wear).

I read about six chapters and half today and I must say, this pair is as adorable as they are underrated. It seemed a little unexpected at first, but the way you write it makes the reader become really comfortable with them.

Also, I like that you still follow the plot. I only saw the anime once, but it was still easy to follow the events so far. I would ask you to be just a little bit more subtle with your change of perspective, so you won't have to use that line to cut between scenes. It is a matter of choice and as I've said, it's easy to get used to your style, but this is one aspect to consider.

The story is well-written and easy to read, though I think having a beta reader looking over some small mistakes here and there could help. I don't think I found any mistakes bad enough to bother me (and I am easily bothered by this), they're all small and easy to ignore, but in the future, I think you may want to consider working with a beta.

Congrats for the development of the story so far! I never thought Miranda's clumsiness could be a good pretext for her to start talking to someone - I'm so glad I was wrong! Haha. But really, the way you approached this ship and slowly made them fall for each other is simply adorable. Your characters are realistic and close to canon too.

This is very sweet, I love that Miranda has found happiness. I think that your characterization of all the characters are realistic. I was sad to learn that are barely any storys about Miranda. So thanks a bunch for writing and sharing your lovely story.

I knew something baf was comming it a rule. I thought That you started telling an alternative story but then the noah appeared and i slowly started to realise at wich moment of the plot we where at. The mood dropped so suddenly, i'm glad to know they keeped some habbits of more happier times but i also feel like they both are destroyed inside. Marie for the loss of kanda and miranda because of the injustice Allen have to deal with.
Also marie hugging her Just made my heart melt... So good chapter as always :) it was Nice having it this soon ~

I Love this Story so much and i like the way you Porträt the characters in here. I am patiently waiting for the next chapter :))

That was Just 17 chapters of pure kindness and fluff. Thank you sooo Much !

It's good to see you back again ! Your chapitres are always enjoyable and it's nice to read from miranda point of view for once ~
Its more of a détail,but no blind people can experience the fear of height if thet can't see the floor?
Anyways,i Hope you doing well and That you enjoy writing again

sorry it have been long since i revewed one of your chapiter...

the amount of respect in this chapter is stunning. from marie's " please TRY not to think so poorly of yourself" to Tiedol understanding of marie's secret garden.

also the order's forest clearly is a death trap... ether theses trees want them together or they want them dead.

I love how you play out Marie, there is that stoic side, but then you add his little awkward side with Miranda. You show what he once was like before his solitary behavior. I really like that girl. I applaud you.

I love it XD. Marie and Miranda are too friggin' cute for words.

Aww, poor Miranda! She needs hugs and cookies. Fun action scene! (_)

Watch out for frequently repeated words and/or phrases, like just and alright; play with them & have fun rewording things to keep the reader's brain engaged. Can't wait to see what comes next!