Hey, hi! So, I read your story and I really like the princess universe, if I could say so. Well, the one which is close to the enchanted forest.

Regina's past was true to herself. Maybe the "darkness" stuff was a little too much? I understand you want to reuse that part of her which is really interesting, but I'm not sure it actually fits in here. Although, I took it a little more in a metaphorical way, and then it felt better.

I found that the end was a little bit too fast after all this struggling, but it was still good.

You indeed make a lot of mistakes. I'm actually not a natural English speaker, so it was kind of confusing. But my English was good enough to know what you meant, though. I guess it was okay.

I think it would have been interesting to see what was the real reactions of different kingdoms. But I'm just saying. It didn't matter really much to me.

Except for that, it was really cute and really sweet. The development was slow, but I love it this way!

Well, anyway. I enjoyed reading your story, so thanks for sharing it! See you!

Lion

great story well written some excellent humour.

Wow what a magnificent story and beautifully written

Wow.i love this story

love it made me cry

I love this story so much it's so cute thank you for writing it

Awesome story adorable so how are they goimg to produce air are u goong to doa sequel be so awesome

love the that the relationship took it's time to progress!

Loved this story, so many feels!

cute AND amazing story, thank you very much

awesome Snow

awesome

Yes... A perfect ending for them... Love it..

Wow, I have to say that this is truly great piece of work :)

Oh, my goodness! This cannot end well!