This was cute. I'm sure Mac will like the yacht.

I like the story. :) Its cool they went shopping together. :) Um... sorry, I got no clue what they should get Jean. The only thing that comes to mind is a dress, (And honestly most people do NOT like getting clothes for Christmas.)

I agree there's not much here, but I do see potential. It's definitely tongue in cheek. Please continue with it.

Maybe instead of rushing to write your story, you should've done a little research into yachts. If you had, you'd find how expensive even small yachts are, not to mention how impractical they are for those who aren't rich enough to maintain them. Rushing your story results in a bad story for readers to enjoy. Slow down, take your time in writing. Your readers will appreciate it.

This is gonna be good! I can hardly wait to find out what the catch is with the yacht. Gift for Jean, though - maybe a fishing trip ... on Mac's new yacht!

Troll hard baby troll hard!

OK so a yacht is a bit out there lol! Unless it's big model of a yacht. Don't know what Jean would want

Sorry? is there more to this posting than a thank you to someone?
The story is not posted !?
Thank you

Sorry, I thought I uploaded it. I will forget things like that.

I'm all for new writers, no offense, but there's no story here.