Reviews for The Valley of the End
Udle chapter 18 . 9/8
AHHHHHH! This is my first introduction to Hyuuga stuff and I'm so here for it. I really like what you've done with Hana's character and am looking forward to what happens next.
I'd definitely read original content particularly if you don't need to see the original work. Sometimes AUs don't quite stand up on their own. But if you put in enough background then I'd love to read it!
Udle chapter 17 . 9/8
AHHHH!
I'm an old school Sakura/Sasuke fan and am so happy to see fics that are still updating. I love they way you write their interactions. I also like how you don't keep characters like Minato and Jiraya as they are in the original story. In that they're idealized memories, but in this fic they're having to live out a really different world. I like the darkness you bring out in them.
Uchiha Misaki chapter 18 . 8/26
Thanks for the update. Love this are we going to have a baby momma drama coming up.
DeepPoeticGirl chapter 18 . 8/24
aaaaaaah! this whole chapter is just dsklhlkdhasklhg. sakura finding having her own relief thank goodness. sasuke not being able to stop himself from giving it to her :)))) wonderful. i really like sasuke's friendship with hana. he really does need a friend. all of his old ones are in the resistance or abandoned him. and ngl i really dont like masami now LMAO.
DeepPoeticGirl chapter 17 . 8/24
ahhhh! it's nice to see that an uchiha was uncomfortable when he suspected that sasuke might be raping her. like despite being the enemy, some are still not 10000% blindly loyal to the uchiha line. and how sakura thought she really could get the advantage making people think that he was but she couldn't do that to sasuke because she loves him. so good. and man i usually love minato but he's like too sharp for me in this lmao. im like omg arent u supposed to be a warmer father slkhalkhdsklhg (insert angry pepe emoji). but like they are war so... lmao
DeepPoeticGirl chapter 16 . 8/24
Omg that last line. My fave is still the one about Sasuke not being sure he's ever had a type but Sakura but I already told you that. Love ittttt. On to the next chapter!
invalidated chapter 18 . 8/23
Every chapter hurts! Oh my god. I love it. But I also hate it. But I love it more. Your writing is impeccable, wish you all the best to get published!
qvism chapter 1 . 8/18
I actually liked the Sasuke-Sakura food fight scene the most - it was extremely realistic and tangibly written! They had enough spunk!
I actually wished that you would've kept the hostility between Sasuke and Sakura which would've made the story even more dynamic and intense but you probably decided to go for tragic instead.

Maybe you can include more hostility between Sasuke and Sakura in the future chapters, yes maybe?
WingingItLass chapter 18 . 8/14
So, just spent most of my way reading through this entire fic and HOLY SHIT is it good!
I'll do a profile creep later to see what else you already have out and would for sure be into reading your original works as well!
lovessfandom chapter 18 . 8/13
Ah so good*crying* update please
SoSymmetrical chapter 18 . 8/11
I’m sorry you’re having bad episodes. If it makes you feel any better, reading your work helps me deal with my mental illness. I really love how you’ve connected the romantic storyline with the political!
EWHH its Kenna chapter 18 . 8/11
I don't read ff anymore; but, I still check my email to see if there have been updates on this story. I thoroughly enjoy it. I look forward to reading more. Your style and plot line is fantastic. It runs very smoothly.

Thank you!
SoSymmetrical chapter 15 . 8/10
Gotta stand in front of the open refrigerator after this one...
whitenight chapter 18 . 8/9
I would rather not be in Sakura's shoes...

Seriously... I feel so sorry for her. She has to strip off her self-respect to survive and I bet she is losing some parts of herself by doing so. Even though she did betray him, it does make me angry that Sasuke imprisoned her. Bastard.
sailormoonie17 chapter 18 . 8/9
AWESOME chapters again! I like how your characters are consistently up against tough situations and choices.
Can't wait for the next one!
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