Love the story so far. Keep up the good work.

FABS

This was a really great story! Once I started I could not stop reading it! I loved the use of Tatsu!

Not a big fan of Felicity in this story, kinda feel like she does more harm than good being a part of the team.

I really hope there isn't a Olicity ending to this story.

Ok, this so was not an olicity story. U totally missed the mark. U make every character look very immature and very out of character. The storyline is also very contrived. U r a good writer, despite the plot line u chose to go with, and I think u have a lot a room for growth. However I think u need to learn to give your characters individualism. Felicity...there is more to her than just being a love interest for the main male character. Also u put way to much emphasis on Felicity's love life; u seem to define her by the men she falls for and that is not a good thing to promote w women.

So far in just the beginning of this story I strongly think u have totally misconstrued Felicity and Rays relationship and the reason behind her rejection of Oliver. First, Felicity did not choose Ray nor did it cause her to reject Oliver. Her hook up w Ray came much later if you'll remember. She rejected Oliver bc he was willing to trust and team up Malcolm Merlyn a man responsible for a lot of pain for many of the important women in Oliver's life: Laurel, Thea, Sara, and even Moira in the past. So the fact that u not so subtly put the blain on Felicity's shoulders was very insulting to me as any female would be insulted. It's a lot like slit shaming. U r basically saying that bc Felicity rejected Oliver (who has rejected her many times in the past wasn't even will to be in an actual relationship w her bc it was too dangerous - a totally cliched concept in it self - but it's not ok for Felicity to be the one to put her foot down this time). On top of that, Oliver is always the one to leave/abandon/reject Felicity in the past so it totally makes sense that Felicity would have a hard time trusting his love and even his friendship considering all the times he leaves her and the team and goes off to do his own thing. Not to mention Felicity's abandonment issues which root back to her father leaving her and her mother when she was younger. Also Felicity put up w Oliver's relationship w Sara but u clearly have Oliver not willing to do the same w Felicity's relationship w Ray. I think u totally missed the mark on a lot of deeper issues and blamed way too much on Felicity. However since this is the first chapter, I will reserve final judgment until later...

Love it.

Please update

I'm sorry but Felicity needs to grow the hell up and stop acting like a bratty little child.

I havn't looked ahead in the story but I'm kind of hoping that Ollie and Felicity don't get together, I'm kind of hoping that he get's with Tatsu.

Would she?

Felicity in this story is both whiney and annoying.

Good Story! I'm usually a big fan of Felicity but so far in this story she hasn't been my favorite person, so BRAVO!

Let's not forget that the only reason that Ray was able to complete his suit was because he scavenged through QC's R&D dept. to get the final components he needed.