I can't wait for the next one!

It's too much like the original books. Also, the students being sorted are just going in the houses their parents were in. I'm sure at least some of them would have been different.

I don't understand. Why did you revise this story? It was fine the way it was and quite good. After spending so time reading it, I feel like it was a waste of time. And you haven't even explained why you revised this story in the first place? Unfortunately I'll have to unfollow. Sorry.

I really love this fanfic the way it is, but since you are the author I trust that you will make it even better.

tbh I like this story but there are so many things that bother me. While it's true that you got the teenage feel down because they all sound like teenagers I actually didn't know this chapter was Alice's POV until catching sight of how she was referred as despite having already read your previous author note that said you would switch characters. I think that's because Rose's and Alice's inner narrations sound exactly the same. I understand that you're still the same person and obviously you can't really change the way you write, you could maybe, give Alice different views of life because having Alice dread potions was totally a Rose thing to me and made me think "oh yeah that's little rosie" since you previously wrote that Rose didn't want to have potions with the Slytherins. Just try to make them different people. Another thing that makes me squirm is that you make a lot of people sound perfect and then suddenly my Mary/Gary Sue alert is popping up. Yes, I understand that Rose is the daughter of two war heroes and yes I understand that everyone would love to date Albus but oh no Scorpius is so rude even to his own cousin! ...and then you used the potion scene on tumblr almost word for word without crediting them (actually that's probably why I'm so angry rn CREDIT PEOPLE PLEASE). In the end tho, this story is pretty good and the grammar is on point. Keep on writing!

I really love this story!

I really love your story, but I'm a little confused about how old is everyone. At first, I thought Rose and Albus were in sixth year, James in seventh and Annice in fifth year, but then Rose talks about Alice been Head Girl instead of her. If Alice is Head Girl, she is in seventh year along with James, but why Rose would have been Head Girl if she's still in sixth year? And then, I got totally lost when Alice is in Herbology and guess what: Annice, a fifth year, is in a seventh year class. Could you fix this misleading facts in the future? I completely lost it.

I love your story, really looking forward to reading some more.

Love the story, really well written but please stop with the author's notes for chapters, just put it at the top of the next chapter! It gets hopes up for a chapter! Hope you can get the next chapter up soon

Omigod that was amazing! At first I didn't like reading the Vixen chapters just cuz she's an adult but there's actually a good plot so it makes it interesting. And it was so cute! I really hope Will and Vixen stop hating each other and fall in love though bc they have a daughter that would be ideal. I love the story so far though, keep up the good work!

I've noticed that a lot of smut in fanfictions are always really aggressive or like, idk just off because of the words the author uses to describe it. I think you really nailed it with the language used, it made it seem very mature and sweet even though they weren't actually doing it out of love lol. Bc it's obvious that they both feel something for each other that isn't hate, and from what I've read, James wouldn't want to take advantage of Annice, especially hurt her.

I LOVE THIS STORY AHHHH

Okay, I officially reallyyy ship Annice and James. It's such a forbidden love and that makes it exciting.

I'm finding that I'm enjoying the Annice chapters more than the others, although I really love all of the other ones too. But Annice is just sooo cool and different, and I love that she is a good artist, and is so torn between who she wants to be and who she should be.

This story is so well written and all of the characters have their own unique personalities which makes it really interesting. To be honest, I'm glad you are conforming to the typical James Sirius Potter persona, because I truly do believe that he would be the way we all make him out to be.