Wow! I loved this. Such powerful writing here.

Simply perfect.

Really good!

I don't know what you're talking about when you said you're not good at this style of writing! This is truely a pretty epic piece!

That was lovely, I don't normally like reading bethyl, the show kind of ruined that for me, but this was really nice. Very in character :)

I've sat staring at this review box for five minutes now. And I've spent four of them just trying to formulate words. This was just so beautiful! But it's more than that. So much more. Like that of the Grinch, I think my heart just expanded four sizes since reading this. LOL. You have a remarkable knack at grasping hold of the character's emotion and taking the reader through every step of it along side them. I felt every word of this story. So good! You should write Books for a living. Cause I would buy them:)

You write alot of preludes that could turn into really beautiful storylines. *hint hint*

This is better than you give yourself credit for. And worth turning into something. :)

This is beautiful and simple and perfectly encompasses the gentle precautions that come with loving Beth.

Love this!

Another great story! I like your version of events much better than what has actually happened so far in the show this season. Seriously though, you are an incredibly gifted writer and I have enjoyed every single TWD fanfic you have written thus far. I really hope you will do more.

This is amazing. please continue ::you have daryk's thoughts just right.

Awww...I loved it. Thank you for sharing. And you would take better care of it. A lot of us could have done a better job than that train wreck of a MSF.
This was great... thank you.

alright you're crazy if you don't think that's good, cause it was awesome

This was great! I loved it!

This was beautiful xx