Reviews for Forbidden Child
GodKing.5016 chapter 1 . 22h
This was an amazing story one of the best I have read in the 10 years I have read FanFiction. It’s a shame to see it abandoned, the story had so much more potential.
FearHimself chapter 20 . 7/21
Bro please update.. Fantastic story
Professor Donger chapter 20 . 7/14
Update this, Please, I beg of you
I love Ms oleary chapter 4 . 6/30
Mrs Evelyn has to did because if she believes there family members they can't date
Knowme chapter 9 . 6/29
she cares. they care. god job olympians. though i thought athena would do his assignments
Knowme chapter 8 . 6/28
yeah that is. cooler than the dark side of the moon.
Knowme chapter 7 . 6/28
cuteness overload
OneDocToHealThemAll chapter 20 . 6/30
This is an awesome story if I ever read one.

I like your take, I love the family dynamics between the olympians.
dextron11 chapter 20 . 6/18
It’s a pity this seems to be dead. It has one of the most balanced Pertemis relationships in the genre. Please come back to this.
Markus-Antonius chapter 20 . 6/16
This has been fun to read! I hope to see more!
TheDesertFox12 chapter 20 . 5/30
Pls Update!
Apollo2001 chapter 20 . 5/26
is this the end of the story?
I Will Kill Your Fav Character chapter 20 . 5/22
Yeah this is still the best Pertemis fanfiction. Reread it after a long time and it still holds up.
sleepingkitty14 chapter 18 . 5/22
It wasn't until this chapter's authors note that I realised that you weren't just a talented writer, but a true writer. Good job
max chapter 20 . 5/18
Really love the story and I hope you continue it! Please update soon it been over a year!
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