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Guest chapter 19 . 7/22/2019 It’s been a few years but oh my god. This chapter needs a warning at the top or at the beginning. If I had known that’s what this entailed, I wouldn’t have read it. It makes me sick to my stomach. |
gammathetaalpha chapter 26 . 6/12/2018 Good two stories! Love the first, the sequel, and hope Andi and Bruce's relationship turns out better than they expected. Can't wait for the final story! |
Abandon All Sanity chapter 1 . 6/4/2018 FUCK FUCK FUCK I JUST FINISHED THE FIRST ONE AND I WAS EQUALLY HOPING YOU HAD A SEQUEL AND THAT YOU DIDNT HAVE A SEQUEL BECAUSE I HAVE A 1500 WORD UNI ESSAY DUE IN 6 HOURS AND I ALSO KNOW IM GOING TO SACRIFICE 10 PERCENT TO READ THIS FUCKING BOOK SO IT BETTER BE AS GOOD AS THE FIRST ONE |
ThePersonWithTheReallyLongName chapter 26 . 5/22/2018 So last time I read your story the sequel wan't even finished but I just binged both ans they are lovely. I hope you're still Fanfictioning, if so I have another story that I hope you read because it's really the bees knees even if you don't write anymore. It 'What They Wouldn't Do' It's a Daredevil fic and it got me hooked without even being part of the fandom. Anywho I wish you the best and all the success in your endevours. -Emma |
JJJPK chapter 26 . 8/20/2017 Well dang. Now we need you to complete the (obvious) trilogy. Thanks for ripping my heart out...yet again. Oh well, not like I had any use for it anyway, except to melt for Bruce and Andi scenes. |
JJJPK chapter 3 . 8/20/2017 M'kay, where's Bruce? |
JJJPK chapter 1 . 8/19/2017 Thank goodness this exists, because the end of Unmasked gave me a mini heart attack! I need more Andi and Bruce and Harley! |
The Darkman chapter 26 . 2/27/2016 I did not see that ending! Well played with the final few paragraphs. I can just see the glare in Andi's eyes at the end. |
greenwood-esther chapter 26 . 11/29/2015 PLEASE make a sequel soon! This story is amazing, Andi is such a refreshing and interesting OC and your writing is incredible. |
restfulsky5 chapter 26 . 10/23/2015 I sort of love how you managed to keep Ivy and Harley a big part of this story, but only had them in a couple of scenes, the beginning and the end! That was very smart. I do feel sorry for Andi and Bruce...not sure which one I feel sorriest for at this point...and you really did well to portray their relationship. I wasn't surprised Bruce sort of fell into the passion at the end, at all. Hehe. I, too, and glad that JP is still alive. He's a fantastic OC, and now you can use him in a sequel... Hint hint. This was wonderfully done... and I hope you have a third story up your sleeve! |
BlueEyedPisces chapter 26 . 10/22/2015 I can not say enough about this story! Your writing skills are absolutely fabulous and the way you portrayed Bruce is amazing I love the fact that no matter what "Gotham is first" and Andi has to be like everyone else, it sucks because you want them together but it's wonderful in these stories. I hope you write a third part :) thanks again for the great stories. |
Emperor Tiberius chapter 26 . 10/21/2015 Very interesting. An excellent final installment for the middle book of a series. You clearly delineate which threads are being wrapped up, and which are still hanging over our dear main character's heads, in your usual skillful style. Hmm... JP's line about Andi hating herself if she'd killed Deadshot... I am unsure if that is correct. For one thing, it seems a touch condescending, although I doubt he meant it that way. For another, the bleakest possible realization of this arc is Andi becoming the very thing she hates with the best of intentions (and I never under-estimate your capacity for bleakness). I'm not entirely sure it really would have made her hate herself. She is a woman of remarkable conviction. I disagree with Andi's line about Harley and Ivy getting what they wanted. Terrible things happen to Gotham so much that I don't know if 'softened' should be changed to 'another day in the life'. And all they've really done with Andi is to harden her resolve and make her commit herself firmly against them. But then our main gal is a trifle pessimistic, with good reason. Thanks for a great story! |
Love.Fiction.2020 chapter 26 . 10/9/2015 Finally!:)))) can't wait for the next story! But why does she think he doesn't love her? |
Uncommon fairy chapter 26 . 10/7/2015 Ugh, how do you make this so awesome? I really love JP and Andi, they are really cute in an annoying best friend way. I think JP will show up in the (dare I say it?) sequel. And I am a little bit too excited to see Harley and Ivy come back, they kinda grew on me. I both loved and hated the ending, I was so happy that she finally kissed Bruce again, but it is so sad that he can't/ doesn't love her right now. I think if there is a sequel (...hint, hint) then they will end up together for sure. Anyways, please write the sequel (ahem) soon. Loved the story as always |
EStrunk chapter 26 . 10/6/2015 First off, a confession. Somehow I didn't read all of the last chapter. Must've gotten interrupted or something. Quite the ending! Can't really disagree with what Azrael did. Re the epilogue - way to leave the opening for a sequel. Fun to get J.P. back for a bit. His relationship advice cracked me up. Not so sure that Batman isn't in love with Andi. Sad that she's so sure. Having unfortunately nosy questions re exactly what she can feel below the waist. None of my business I guess. Lovely poetic writing at the end. Thanks for another great story. |