love this story so far. i have read uto part 7. keep it up and make more lke this. welldone :)

Sweet
Love this story
Cried when people were saying goodbye to him
Kind of sad he didn't see Andy saying her goodbyes.
But kinda love that you put her on the story, being you a CJ/Toby shipper

That was a really good story. It made me cry, laugh and I love the banter between C.J. and Toby that you've captured so well. This is probably one of your best stories so far.

Another really good story. I'm not really all that into pairings, but i've been liking yours.
A little advice though: Don't post your entire story on one day. I noticed that with this one and The Death of a Friend that you did that. A lot of people won't be able to finish a twenty-five, thirty chapter story in one day, nor will they want to.I know that i usually see that a story has a ton of chapters already written and i go, 'maybe later'. So posting one or two chapters a week will probably get a few readers. Also it will get more people to review because they'll want to know what's going to happen next. So, yeah. i'll stop rambling at you now.
BOC

amazing - and very dramatic.

i'm british, and the city where i live is on one of the oldest parts of one of the most risk-prone tracks in the country, which can be terifying.

this captures some of the essence of that unpredictablity and fear.

This story still gives me the chills! You are such an excellent writer! I hope you know that. :) Great job on this one. I loved re-reading it. :)

Lisa

Great story idea!

The only downer is that due to excessive ER viewing, and my husband (the ex-EMT) medical innacuracies were on my mind

But that's just me!