Reviews for Saints Row 4: (Johnny Gat x Female Boss OC) |
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![]() ![]() Bruh please finish this . , . |
![]() ![]() ![]() this was a good read i hope you write more |
![]() ![]() Yo, that was good. But fuck this blushing thing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() êwê Bow chika bow wow chika bow wow |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love your story |
![]() ![]() #funny! Try to be more detailed and try to add Jezebel more! Ps... Make it funnier, a tad sadder and a bit heartfelt. A blueprint of a beautiful comedy! |
![]() ![]() Drunk Pierce is always funny. |
![]() ![]() Smut |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please continue! Its so awesome! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yo update this thing its awesome |
![]() ![]() Good story. Love it and it funny |
![]() ![]() I think the ending of your story should be like this. " the next day, the boss is playing pool with Ben and shaundi. So the boss sees Johnny come in and Johnny takes the boss and takes to her on the stairs in the spaceships hall. He asks if she's ok, she try's to stall and keep her secret but Johnny already says she knows." Then they had time, if you know what I mean. Then God was so greatful he recreates Aisha and she shows up excited to see Johnny. Johnny is happy and drunkish. They are in a bed room and the boss walks in. She's not seen so she runs out angry, so asks Kenzie to create a simulation that puts her in Stilwater. After that the boss isn't found Johnny asks Kenzie where is and Kenzie explains what happens. Johnny goes to Stilwater and looks everywhere then find the boss In the old church. Looking at the pictures and candles Johnny comes up and try's to apologize. Go on from there! |
![]() ![]() ![]() loved it |
![]() ![]() ![]() love this story make more |
![]() ![]() What would be really nice to the ending is if it's a sweet smut. :o Like, you can have the best of both worlds on this one! Anyways, love the way this is going so far. :) Keep up the good work! |