quahoua craime

This one is very ,I found Venger lacking of sex-appeal without his wings

It's well written. I will give you that.

My one complaint isyou need to space after it gets annoying having to read it like this and when people read,they go, " Oh, this is an alright Fic."and people are soon confused about what's going on.

So if you wouldn't mind, remember to space, and then people will be all like, "Oh, that looks much better." So just remember to space in your future chapters, and you'll be all set.

You really should keep on writing more cus the ideas are very good.

Awesome story. Very detailed, makes me think of the d&d games i used to play on the computer.

Very interesting idea of setting D&D in an anime world, or is it the other way around?

Well, what ever the case, can't wait to see what happens next.

Awesome. Will it run along the series line or with a whole new set of adventures? Looking forward to Chapter 4.