Are you going to add next part soon? It's pretty good but I'm not sure if it's finished yet or not :) first chap was little but worse. It was more simple (and shorter too). However I still like it:)

Keep going! :)

I love your story... wants to know what happens next... my english is bad, always get the tenses wrong, but im following your story till the end...

Very well written! It stays true to the characters and keeps you scrolling!