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Guest chapter 3 . 7/16 Beautiful! Extremely beautiful! |
b6076b6076 chapter 1 . 5/3 Does the muse take bribes? |
FromTheUnknown chapter 3 . 2/15/2019 I don't care how slow the updates are, I would just like to know if you're going to continue it? |
Dominus1389 chapter 3 . 2/14/2019 More of this ! I have some small ideas to add PM me if interested |
Darth Power chapter 3 . 8/14/2018 great story |
ReaperOfBalance chapter 3 . 7/22/2018 For Ginny, she technically owes him a life debt for the chamber of secrets. If you want to get very technical then Susan Bones does to. If you want to get very technical, quite a few witches owe him a debt for killing Voldemort three times Also if also recommend madam Malkin as she not only has a big pair of tits but also can make any garments Harry could want for his slaves plus it gets him a spy in Daiagon |
ReaperOfBalance chapter 2 . 7/22/2018 Nice chap, I can see Bella finding women and testing them out for Harry. Heck I could see them raping side by side I have a way to explain Harry going back and you could combine options A&B for the first idea For the Weasley one, them doing it because they have isn’t really then turning dark. Now Harry could rape and enslave Ginny, use her to get to Molly and break them in (Arthur works long hours and the older children have moved out while the others still go to school so Molly is alone quite a bit) before having Molly start potioning her family in ways to make them darker or subservient to Harry (though they should make Ron’s life hell) |
ReaperOfBalance chapter 1 . 7/21/2018 Interesting start, some slight grammar problems but nothing major for pairing options I’d suggest Narcissa Malfoy Black, Andromeda Tonks Black, Nymphadora Tonks, Hermione Granger, Luna Lovegood, Susan and Amelia Bones, Fleur Delacour, Daphne Greengrass, Tracy Davis, and Reeta Skeeter. Use one or all of them is you wish and if you want reasons then message me and I’ll gladly give them, though one reason for narcissa and Andromeda is for Harry to have all three Black Family Sisters |
Guest chapter 3 . 6/18/2018 you gonna come back to this? |
Kindred Scarlet chapter 1 . 6/20/2018 I wish you still updated this |
Dark-Prince-of-Clowns chapter 3 . 4/6/2018 Absolutly brilliant! *Grins* A small tip; After someone has been raped even once, their body tends to try and protect itself from damage by makeing ANY sexual attantion, no matter how small, make the body self-lubricate. Some women begins to feel turned on, other don't, but their body will still BE turned on in both cases. |
Dark-Prince-of-Clowns chapter 2 . 4/6/2018 That sex scene was HOT! Please write more of them! |
b6076b6076 chapter 3 . 12/1/2017 New chapter please. |
Yaw613 chapter 3 . 10/3/2017 Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and liked it a lot. Have Harry Rape Bellatrix for killing Sirius. |
Aetherium21 chapter 1 . 9/13/2017 Ahaha what a fun start to the story, I hope you have more time to dedicate to it in the future. They make for an interesting pairing. |