Reviews for Devil Arts Offline
Foalan21 chapter 17 . 7/23
The moniker the Church gives the shield hero 7s actually accurate in this case. The Devil of the shield indeed...
Tomon chapter 18 . 8/11/2019
Very nice addition. For some reason I truly love Kirito being summoned as a Familiar of Zero even thought I know very little of that story :)
Foalan21 chapter 18 . 4/14/2019
welllll there is also the fact that devil magic works on conviction, and with so many devils absolutely convinced and certain that an Event was going to happen, could their magic have done it?
DarkJackel chapter 5 . 4/6/2019
Truly Silica has embarked on an epic quest.

One must wonder how the SAO girls would react to learning the tactics Rias is employing.
DarkJackel chapter 2 . 4/5/2019
Amusing. Hopefully Argo's kin will get a little more screen time before the end of things.
Reader chapter 17 . 3/24/2019
S-Sacrilege! You would deprive a swordsman of his sword?! What manner of devil are you!
Reader chapter 6 . 3/24/2019
I-I—

Now I want Recon to accept Mil-tan IRL. xD New OTP. Mil-tan deserves all the happiness!
SaintInfernalNeos chapter 18 . 1/9/2019
Finally managed to read all of these! Gotta say, they were all enjoyable, both the Canon and the non-canon ones, they show your will to develop and want to expand your universe with your imagination :3

If there is anything I wanna complain about/suggest, it's how there is no focus for the SAO girls in these extra-stories at all, which I would have expected given how sadly lacking that is in the main story. To put an example, RECON and Mil-tan had more focus and relevant screentime here than Silica and Liz had so far, and Sugu barely there too. And they had together more plot-relevant development than any of them with Kirito (Only Sinon wins over on that and because of her arc, after which she was also added to the background cast). Koneko taking a spot as main above all of them because of she being 'adopted' by Kirito and Asuna honestly felt weirder to me, because if in Canon they're already quite neglected then in here they're even more so, and not for bad intentions. I think maybe adding some sidesotories here showing time they spend with Kirito or each other that can't be fit on the main story would help a lot, really, because they're supposed to be important people for Kirito and Asuna but they feel barely above filler characters in the main fic (Probably because you're focusing on 2 main characters and an already big cast, yeah, but even Argo's OC queen gets more screentime and relevance to the plot than them without counting for her Omakes with Argo here...).
Tatsurou-san chapter 7 . 11/24/2018
I'm genuinely surprised a gamer like Kirito wouldn't recognize a Cucco on sight.
krzys2000 chapter 18 . 8/13/2018
Bwahahaa! O poor Rias (not at all). Kirito breaks reality once again ( I like when Kirito breaks reality )
krzys2000 chapter 16 . 8/13/2018
Will there be 3rd part? If yes I will be happy this is looking like good story.
krzys2000 chapter 14 . 8/13/2018
sounds interesting
krzys2000 chapter 12 . 8/13/2018
Oh my God so funny . Best omake ever! I hope there will be 2nd 3rd 4th 5th (and so on) part
Guest chapter 18 . 6/7/2018
Hmm... I would think that the nuckelavee was actually a construct sent by rivals of Rias and/or Sona to embarrass them. That would mean the 'drops' were parts that didn't get destroyed when it was defeated. Of course with this failure they would try again, probably just in time for Christmas.
Angron chapter 11 . 2/24/2018
In a Galaxy, Far, Far Away. Kirito son of Kabaya? Holy Shit! I really hope that one day it will become one truth fanfiction
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