Reviews for Picking Up the Pieces
Shifra25 chapter 1 . 10/30/2019
awesome
lucel18 chapter 1 . 9/11/2019
I loooove this realistic ending too. Thank you so much!
DijaLi chapter 1 . 8/18/2019
Dead brilliant.
This was what I've always wanted, for them to have to put work and effort in, and not just a magic fix. And you delivered amazingly well.
Not to forget, the dichotomy that Jenna feels being mentally a teenager and living an adult life was described perfectly. Every detail was thought of. And the victory was hard won, but all the sweeter for it.
Also, character development done realistically, no obvious oocness, in such a short fic is absolutely stunning. I am delighted.
I am just really glad that I've found this fic. A true gem, all the more precious for its rarity. Now I have a satifactory resolution, which I vastly prefer to the original one, and can lay it to rest in my mind.
All in all, splendidly done.
Emo Unicorn Princess chapter 1 . 8/24/2018
What's so good about picking up the pieces? What if I don't even want to? Caraphenalia by Pierce The Veil feat. Jeremy McKinnon, anyone? No? OK. By the way, that's what I always think of when I see this title
SapphiRubyCrys chapter 1 . 5/23/2018
Aww happy ending
AccioStark chapter 1 . 9/5/2017
Omg I loved this, it was a great read
Anne Riddle 1 chapter 1 . 5/17/2017
Very cute! Loved it! :)
HopeForDuende chapter 1 . 12/19/2016
yay!
Tootsie Roll 101 chapter 1 . 11/12/2016
AHHHHHH SO CUTE
AngieKurosaki chapter 1 . 5/28/2016
Hi! I really likes this fanfic. The best part is that is pretty new, I mean, that gives me hope that could be more fanfics in the future.

I loved it how you writes about this couple. He's so sweet and :3 he's still being him. I'm happy with how the movie ended but it's nice to read something like this. I like happy endings. Yesterday I watched the movie again and then I read this fanfic at night and it was nice. Anyway.

See you! :)
FaithandLove chapter 1 . 3/5/2016
Thank you for writing such a sweet story! I just re-watched 13 Going on 30 and was dying for a bit more of Matty & Jenna (such a brief and abrupt happy ending!), and you've provided the perfect little snippet for that.
myredcabin chapter 1 . 2/2/2016
I didn't want to like Fan Fic of one of my all time Fave Movies! Nope, first few paragraphs, "I don't want to mess with a perfect story!, I'm don't like this addition, not at all, no, Oh, wait, Matty and Wendy didn't last? Matty misses Jenna?..."

Ok, ok, Yes, I really enjoyed reading this fictitious addition to 13 going on 30. It's sweet, like the movie. And, I really noticed you captured Matty soooooooo well! I could picture his expressions. Well done!
Guest chapter 1 . 10/16/2015
Aww I loved it. Love that you left her in that body too. Great story
zaneri0t chapter 1 . 10/1/2015
yassssssss! Thank you for this story!
Rjalker chapter 1 . 9/12/2015
Awesome fic!
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