Reviews for Another Universe(ON HOLDPOSSIBLE ADOPTION)
John Smith chapter 3 . 5/31/2017
WOW! This is so great. I really enjoy this. This is the wierdest choice for a crossover. But I really love it. Btw this changing first person view is very interesting. Also im russian. Now you know that russians also read your fic.
PeanutbutterKing chapter 3 . 6/30/2016
Man this is sad I really thought this was going to be something great it made me laugh brought light into my day we will miss you Lemon Man we will miss you...
Robute Gulliman chapter 3 . 11/28/2015
This is wierd stuff and I like it.
ToMuch chapter 3 . 10/17/2015
Wow this is beautiful just beautiful... I've been reading fanfiction for years, and this just takes the cake. Keep it up you've really got something amazing going on here:)
IamOminous chapter 3 . 8/21/2015
This is awesome! You gotta update! More funny reactions lol !
Apex chapter 3 . 8/17/2015
Hurry up and finish this!
Dragenash115 chapter 3 . 8/12/2015
just found this story and im liking it looking foward to next chaper
Guest chapter 2 . 5/2/2015
this is weird but is interesting are you going to continue i would love to se more of this
Lord Zeppelin chapter 2 . 4/26/2015
I offer this haiku.
A warrior lost,
Unsure of his location,
Who are these women?
Uberdeathninja chapter 2 . 4/2/2015
You leveled Dex? What a feg. JK, good story bruh.
innocuous-gesture chapter 2 . 2/24/2015
I'm glad you decided to continue writing, like I said before you have a good idea. But try to write them longer.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/14/2015
I really think you should continue this, the POV change was smooth, which is difficult for me at least.
You have a good idea here, don't waste it. I'm nit picking now but it was just a little bit short.
Dante Watterson chapter 1 . 1/26/2015
Good job with this Chapter keep going :)