In the fourth section, Teto "request[ed] for more sings to be included" on the music player.
I think it'd be interesting to see a bit more on how Teto's wings and tail work. Do they break through her clothing? Or does she always wear backless shirts/dresses?
I particularly liked the section on what happened when Neru walked to school. It gave a lot to imagine, and I smiled. I also liked how you integrated manga into Neru's personality.
Your voice is very interesting.
-TheMistyLion

This isnt on a break, is it? These nanny bots are a strange idea, but I like how youve been writing Neru. Dont let this die, please!

Hey, this is pretty interesting. Update soon?

More? Soon? :D

wow you made me ship these too
Awesome story, one of the best stories featuring these two

This is great! Technically I've only read about half of the prologue, but I actually searched up Neru and Teto because of this.

You got yourself a new follower!

Good luck with future updates.

Noooo! Not hiatus! Yeah I guess you could call me a fan so please keep at it and get it out of hiatus soon. I really liked your fun writing style and correct grammar plus this story has a lot of potential. Halfway through chapter 1, I already knew that it deserves my fav and follow. I'm excited to see where this will go next so please update soon!

This is really interesting so far! I love hoe you characterized everyone so far, and your writing is very intricate. It has that feel that make you want to keep reading it over and over, sorry if that sound weirdahaha.