Yes! page breaks awesome!

Lovin' this development so far. Excited to see how this goes.. Will Suna Village accept a slave as their Lady? hmmm...

The whole concept is really interesting and I can't wait to see the arc finally unfolding. There are a lot of pieces set to create a very heavy plotted story and I like that, so please, please, please, continue writing. There are a few observations I wanted to point out for you to keep improving your already very good writing skills: be careful with the spelling, I noticed some confusion with "his, he, he's" among other things. Since your narrative is so good, don't let it seem pooor because of minor mistakes :) Also, it would be awesome if you took your time to develop deeper relationships between characters. I mean, Gaara falling in love with Sakura and Sakura loving to have sex with Gaara (taking into account how painful it was and actually is the first, I don't know, twenty times) would be more realistic and captivating for the reader if you construct a solid foundation behind those actions. Thanks for sharing such a nice story, I hope I hear from you soon.

Thanks so much for the update. I'm glad that Gaasaku is getting closer. I'm hoping that she doesn't end up being a slave anymore and they can just be equals.

Interesting that Sakura was not given the seal...I hoped that she wouldn't and I guess Gaara made sure it didn't happen. Poor Ino...This will be interesting to see how the medical training goes..

I'm going to die waiting for the next chapter then I'll haunt this site forever like I already do

This story is SO damn good. Rereading it was totally worth it! Sakura and Sasukes relationship is so cute! I’m so glad they found each other again after such a long time. And I’m so glad it worked out between Gaara and Sakura too. Gosh I love them. I love their chemistry. But WOW their sex scenes were incredible! They are SO cute to each other, aww! They really deserve to be happy and I really hope they won’t fall apart. That’d break my heart.
On another note I really like Sakura and Kankuros relationship too. Shit, everything you’re writing is awesome. Still, I’d also love to see more Temari scenes. Eventhough she always looks and acts so tough, I loved how she still seeked out someone’s company to comfort her in her distress. It showed how human she was and how she trusted Sakura, even if only a little.
I do have one suggestion though, sometimes it’s hard to understand that a scene changed, because of the lack of ‘warning’ or sign to indicate that. It’d help the reading flow if you somehow changed that.
Once again, it was totally worth the wait, thank you so much for this incredible chapter & know I’ll wait patiently for the next one!
Bye~ Ame

Nice chapter.

Loving it!

I love it, but I just not into the gay thing. Let me forget that part haha.

Hhohhnohho...finally. They made
love

This is a great sexy update!

You've updated! Hoorayyy! I love this story so much! And aww Gaara got jealous for a hot minute there. Can't wait to see where you take this next, i hope its not a long wait next time but ill look forward to the next update regardless!

You still have NaruHina right? You're not going to throw a spanner in the works and derail with any SasuNaru ... right?
I hope not.
I love this GaaSaku so much.

That's understandable. Kabuto jealous of Sasuke for being Orochimaru's favorite. Some small Sakura & Sasuke conversation it's easy flow as their great friends. True Gaara is possessive sweetly, he won't have Sakura do any missions & as for the seal that's even more of a 'NO'! To Gaara he wouldn't do that to his Sakura. Sasuke is right, Gaara does truly deeply loves Sakura. (Sweet Smile) Yea Sasuke being gay makes more sense than anything. Gaara doesn't want Sakura 'indecent' in public it's his eyes only.

Amazing chappie btw. I love that you haven't given up on it. :)

I think the beautiful smut is almost outshined by the fact that Sasuke is gay. Yeesh.