Reviews for Wrath of time (rewritten)
mumphie chapter 10 . 7/13
This should be finished! ️
Guest chapter 1 . 6/28
Interesting crossover Harry Potter and the prisoner of Azkaban when Harry goes back in time using the Time Turner's well Time Turner's are only supposed to be used with one person so because Harry is here used it and after you close at the loop time is mad at him so he has to spend a thousand years making it up to time
Ada1229 chapter 3 . 6/4
So uh just finished Chapter 3, that last line doesn't gel with Katie Bell since she's actually one of the 3 Gryffindor Chasers which means she's actually there with Harry. If you had gone with her (I peeked at the start of Chapter 4 and know you didn't) you would have had to rewrite the ending of Chapter 3 to fix that.

The Gryffindor Quidditch team members in 1994 are (Just so there's no confusion later):

Angelinia Johnson (Chaser)
Alicia Spinnett (Chaser)
Katie Bell (Chaser)

Fred Weasley (Beater)
George Weasley (Beater)

Harry Potter (Seeker)
IllusionBreaker chapter 10 . 1/10
Please continue this story.
bellapom chapter 10 . 12/9/2019
This is a great story, please come back to finish it!
Vanadir chapter 10 . 9/21/2019
outstanding sir truly outstanding
Vanadir chapter 2 . 9/21/2019
now as much as we got a Bamf harry we have a jokester Neville have to love the witty banter it being perfect, just the right side of sarcastic brill
thank you
Vanadir chapter 1 . 9/21/2019
awesome thanks, that is one BAMF harry love it
kirstywilson2004 chapter 10 . 7/17/2019
Please update soon
Nemisis420 chapter 9 . 7/11/2019
Harry Potter doesn't swim in the ocean water just wants to be around him
Veronica McClure chapter 9 . 7/8/2019
I don't know, would a 14-year-old really take a 12-year-old into his lap; like she was six rather than twelve. I mean I've heard of adult "Little People" not liking to be treated like a kid. So, I cannot imagine that even if a 12-year-old is half the height of other kids her age, she would appreciate a 14-year-old lifting her onto his lap like a toddler.
Veronica McClure chapter 5 . 7/8/2019
Where you have "through" should be "threwwhere "meet" is should be "mean".
Veronica McClure chapter 5 . 7/8/2019
How about good, physical fitness also increases the power and stamina of their magical cores.

Neville became an Herbologist/ Herbalist because plants didn't make fun of him like other kids did, nor browbeat him like his Grandmother does.

Whereas Harry, who was made to work in the garden in all weather, just for his Aunt to take credit for the results, did not love plants or planting because plants didn't protect him from his relatives, or give him sustenance.
Veronica McClure chapter 3 . 7/8/2019
Someone, get Professor McGonagall a Cowgirl outfit!
Veronica McClure chapter 3 . 7/8/2019
You know, in book Canon, Durmstrang and Beauxbatons were every bit as Co-Ed as Hogwarts. Plus, the senior students each school chose reflected that insofar as each having three girls and three guys.
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