Reviews for Scars
Mistress Charon chapter 1 . 6/30
This was so sweet, and I'm really loving your head-cannon, and agree. I like how we get the Gaang's POV over Katara touching Zuko's scar, it was a nice character study.
KuroUsagid chapter 1 . 11/7/2019
I loved it. Thank you so much for writing it!
scarletarcher chapter 1 . 1/6/2019
This is a magnificent one-shot.
Rose0 chapter 1 . 4/1/2018
This was such a cute little story! I love seeing little moments like that between them. Especially when they have to do with Katara having special girlfriend privileges haha
waking-up-with-happiness chapter 1 . 8/1/2017
I absolutely adored reading this. Love love love!
nina-en-wonderland chapter 1 . 3/11/2017
Well, that just hurt to read, thank you so much. Zutara isn't even my otp of the series but god, did you make me love this story. Their love for each other is just so fierce yet quiet, an enduring strength that you perfectly portrayed. I loved that your described how everyone else felt about both the interactiin and the scar itself, they were so different and had such depth to it. I think Aang and Toph's made me the saddest, because he innocently doesn't see the gravity of it and she too needs someone who understands her that much. Oh, and Ursa; the distance between child and mother was both physical and emotional, which was painful to read. I love your headcanon of protective papabear Hakoda, that was really sweet!
The-Red-Lip chapter 1 . 9/27/2016
Beautiful... This fanfic is absolutely beautiful!
Great job
Shojobaby chapter 1 . 1/30/2016
I love this. You did a great job showing everyone else's reactions, and I did not expect to see Ty Lee's in there, but it worked. I thing Hakoda, Ursa, and Toph are my favorites here.

God bless you.
AllyrianFlame chapter 1 . 10/6/2015
I almost didn't read it bc it was marked incomplete, but I'm glad I did it was cute :3
Guest chapter 1 . 2/18/2015
This was good, except it needed dialogue. Also I think your being unfair to Mai. But that's not new for a Zutara fic, so w/e.
xwhiskeymouth chapter 1 . 2/17/2015
I'm so glad you still write zutara! This was great as always, I'm never disappointed in your writing. Thanks for continuing to write so well, I look forward to reading anything you write in the future!
Kslamm chapter 1 . 2/13/2015
Such a sweet story. I like all the different POV's and the fact that even Mai isn't allowed to touch his scar! It's refreshing to see you post something new. I'm excited for whatever's next!
Kimberly T chapter 1 . 2/1/2015
Excellent character studies!

No, Aang wouldn't get why the scar is such a big deal, because he really doesn't understand the depth and strength of family ties. How could he, given the way he was raised? When not just you but everyone around you neither knows nor cares who their parents were...

And I agree, there should be more fics featuring Hakoda and Zuko. Not more slash fics, heavens no, but bonding fics where Hakoda, like Iroh, sees and tries in his own way to help undo some of the damage that monster Ozai did to such a wonderful young man.
schmellybelly chapter 1 . 1/26/2015
I wish you never stop writing zutara. :) Sometimes I read other people's fics to try something new, but I always, always, always come back to yours because of posts like these (andmaybealsothesmut). Haha. But seriously, your canon just makes so much sense to me. It's flawless.
Anyways, I love this new one too. I know you probably have a busy life in the real world, so I just want to say thanks for continuing to grace is with your gold!
LovinZuko chapter 1 . 1/26/2015
You are spot on! Everything you just explained I've been feeling that way since the show began! The way Katara could only touch his scarred half, and the first time she did in the Crystal Caverns kinda sparked a lifetime of small gentle touches and caresses. She really is showing him love on the side he can't stand the most. They grow to love each other for everything, I also suspect Katara can touch Zuko is because he also has a scar that he protected her against and she will do all she can to heal those wounds emotionally.

I also see the Hakoda and Zuko relationship be more prominent after the series since Zuko needs all the help he can get. Hakoda may try to protect him from the other nations and form a treaty with the Fire Nation as soon as possible. They may go on business expentures and collaborate ideas and stay for dinner in one another's nations. Which may even help the bond with Zuko and Katara as they will see each other often and Hakoda accepts him as part of the family already.

This was just beautiful in the way you wrote it. I pictured it all, was also very in character even though there was not much dialogue. Just their actions proved they were still there. Bravo!
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