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AlyssaOtaku69 chapter 37 . 5/4 Oh yeah, they got it in at least a little bit. You can tell they were pent up though. They wanted to do that for a while. I can't wait till they actually have sex you know it's going to be crazy. |
AlyssaOtaku69 chapter 33 . 5/3 I feel bad for the cat it seems like Merlin is kind of dismissing it and that is sad. |
AlyssaOtaku69 chapter 31 . 5/3 Fucking finally Arthur made that confession. I was wondering when that was going to happen. I had to cringe when we talked about Sir Kay. I know it was essentially and everything but I still couldn't accept it you know what I mean? But I'm glad they are making some progress. You know what would be awesome is if Arthur told Merlin about how he told Gwen how he wanted to escape Camelot with Merlin. That would be interesting to see how Merlin reacts to that. |
AlyssaOtaku69 chapter 30 . 5/3 I SWEAR TO GOD THESE TWO KNOW HOW TO RUIN A FUCKING MOOD! They always ruin it with one thing or another. It's driving me crazy. I literally had to cover my face from screaming out loud in annoyance not to wake my husband. He would have been mad if I woke him at 5 in the morning. |
AlyssaOtaku69 chapter 29 . 5/3 OH FOR THE LOVE OF GOD! Thank you. I thought I would be upset honestly about how the next chapter would go about considering how it was left but I'm glad it wasn't the worst outcome. As for Arthur FINALLY! realizing it's not just him that is going through the wringer that Merlin has been for thousands of YEARS! I'm glad he understands he isn't the only one hurting that Merlin is too. Now I think that all my worries from the last chapter are being taken care of and I'm VERY happy about that. |
AlyssaOtaku69 chapter 28 . 5/3 Now I have to say this chapter bothers me. I will tell you why: 1. It feels like Arthur is now kind of forced to be with him. 2. Merlin has an unhealthy obsession with Arthur and it shows. 3. There love for one another seems really fake. More like forced. 4. There seems to be a lack of trust now and it bothers me more than all of the other ones I pointed out. 5. I feel like Arthur should finish that book and he would know more about Merlin's life. Arthur expects Merlin to be the same and yes that would be normal had Merlin lived a regular lifespan but he lived for far too long for him to stay the same. No one can expect that. Another thing I have to say is HOW DARE ARTHUR COMPARE UTHER TO MERLIN! How are they alike? They aren't. Even with all of Merlin's changes. He might have meant about his obsession with one thing or another but still, that is a rude comment. I don't know how it's going to go from here but I hope it doesn't seem forced and they can gain trust for each other again because I don't think I will be okay with their love for one another if it seems forced. No offense of course because I will still read the story. |
AlyssaOtaku69 chapter 27 . 5/3 These boys are annoying. He just needs to tell him he loves him and always has. Arthur needs to realize that after everything Merlin went through in his life no one can remain the same. I feel like I know what's going to happen next but I will see if I'm right before I say anything. |
AlyssaOtaku69 chapter 25 . 5/2 I get it I mean I really do get it but I think I have to say Merlin is wrong for what he did at the end to Arthur. I get why he did it and I understand but I still stand by thinking he was wrong for it. As for Arthur, he has to understand AT THE VERY LEAST A LITTLE BIT EVEN IF HE'S A CLOT POLE! That Merlin has been alone and Arthur has a lot of emotional baggage so of course, Merlin doesn't know his feelings. He needs to stop being a Tsundere and tell Merlin how much he means to him. |
AlyssaOtaku69 chapter 22 . 4/30 Oh I know it's against Arthur's moral code because of what his dad put in his head and all that but he usually bent the rules for Merlin all of the time anyway so I hope he really does grow to accept it. I wonder if Merlin talks to him about his powers with magic and the dragons would Arthur feel more comfortable. And if Arthur read the book up until his death then he should know that his father is the reason the dragon attacked Camelot, to begin with. I feel like Arthur really isn't seeing that every action his father made had a reaction. The fact that Uther persecuted sorcerers and other magical beings alike proved that it would be his own undoing because he started that war and the magical community was only fighting back what Uther himself has started. Arthur has to think of it from another perspective such as if Camelot was being attacked would he want to take revenge yes he would so that's all the magical community was doing taking revenge on Uther. I know I'm ranting but still, it kind of irks me that no one really has seen that perspective. Like, be serious you can't expect someone not to hurt you if you hurt them. |
AlyssaOtaku69 chapter 21 . 4/30 I feel bad for Merlin in this one. I can't explain why but the feeling of loss and acceptance is just a natural thing in life. I think him wanting the dragon egg with him because that is his kin is also a sign of him wanting something that would also accept him unconditionally. |
AlyssaOtaku69 chapter 20 . 4/30 Shit, you went through something terrible and if you ever need anyone to talk to you can PM I am always on here to listen well technically because we can't really listen to a story. But I will always read what you got to say or to your own personal story. |
AlyssaOtaku69 chapter 19 . 4/30 I can't help but picture the two now raising a damn dragon with each other. How splendid. |
AlyssaOtaku69 chapter 18 . 4/30 hahaha, You rescue Merlin... my dear Arthur you little nutter. He is precious. Well, he did tend to rescue or take care of Merlin when absolutely necessary but it was always after Merlin went to save him, to begin with. They are too precious together. |
AlyssaOtaku69 chapter 14 . 4/29 So I do think of the idea of Arthur going back into the room to read the book at night without Merlin actually knowing about it. I think the most important part is the aftermath of Arthur dying is what he should really read considering THAT shows how much he really meant to Merlin. It would be crazy but not shocking if Merlin had his own personal journal of his that he wrote just about how his days were such as how he was feeling that day or how bad it really got as he went on in life. I think he really got into his feelings. Shit, Merlin could write a book about his life. In this story can he look into his own memories? |
AlyssaOtaku69 chapter 13 . 4/28 I just noticed something Percival could have literally made a family line and it continued out of Camelot. That would explain someone knowing so much about the Round Table and all that. |