Reviews for Hold Onto Life
Chardinal chapter 2 . 1/21/2018
This was magical. :D
Alex frost chapter 2 . 1/28/2015
I LOVE THIS STORY! This is the second time I have read it and I think I have fallen in love with it even more! I swear this is the best Danny Phantom fanfic I have ever read! It is amazing!

Pleasure we want more Danny and jazz they so sweet together
Dp Fan chapter 2 . 1/28/2015
This is an epic story and I have loved every single chapter of it. My favourite part was Danny and Jazz look out for every other it was so sweet XD

Pleasure writing more of hem
Star chapter 2 . 1/28/2015
I continuously love this story, and I feel so close to the characters since you've 'fleshed' them out. Amazing job, and Pleasure more jazz and Danny bonding
Nicki spirit chapter 2 . 1/28/2015
I have to say this is one of the best stories I have ever read
Young phantom chapter 2 . 1/28/2015
This story is so amazing it makes me want to cry. Every chapter I was squealing during Danny and Jazz "moments". This is literally perfection. I hope that you continue write them
Tyni14 chapter 2 . 1/27/2015
Aw! This was immensely cute and perfectly written! Every character felt perfect and had a reaction that could almost be canon. I like how this was mostly a fluffy story and didn't focus on the bad things that could happen. Well done!

Tiny Tyni
SwimmerGirl96 chapter 2 . 1/26/2015
I LOVE IT !

Please update this soon! This fic is too good to end here :)
dudebladeX chapter 2 . 1/26/2015
I know that you have finish it but Can you update please? Please please please please please please

I really love your story :)
guest chapter 2 . 1/26/2015
I could care less about the summary, I would like you to continue please.
bibliophile chapter 2 . 1/26/2015
This story is so well written, I feel like I'm actually watching an episode of Danny Phantom. Everyone is written exactly how I would imagine them in the show!

well done update soon
Specter chapter 2 . 1/26/2015
I love reading this! I hope you come back to it someday I love it so much ! (:
Kimori Takahashi chapter 2 . 1/26/2015
Are you still going to continue the story? Please, I really like the story!
(and sincerely regret not reading it sooner)
qjs833 chapter 2 . 1/26/2015
I really enjoy reading your story why you have to stop here.

IT so Amazing why stop here you can continues it so awesome, and touching seeing Jazz and Danny so close together ever in death Jazz still stay close to her brother I love sibling bonding It bring tear to my eyes

I love to see more of them and also will be nice to see how Jazz and danny fight together as one

I hope that one day you can continues the story :)

well take care and god bless and thank for the awesome story
Starlin's Ghost chapter 2 . 1/25/2015
I really liked this. I appreciated the theory you made up behind why Jazz could hold onto all of herself and why she hasn't changed and whatnot; I think the different ways ghosts are formed and how much they remember of their lives based on the way they were formed or how they died is really interesting to think about (Woo! SCIENCE! Lol). I also liked how Danny gets caught up in a moment of anger and that lets out his secret... I feel like that would happen more realistically than PP or something cute like the PP reveal. But I also appreciated that while your reveal was realistic, it was still really happy and meaningful at the end. It's like you needed no explanation for Maddie and Jack's reactions; they just ultimately decide to trust their kids and accept them and love them for who and what they are, and no longer hold onto the paranoia that ghosts could be acting good to deceive or manipulate humans later. Their daughter still looks and acts like their daughter, and she's provided enough evidence for the case that there are "good ghosts," and Danny of course, still acts the same and provides them with the necessary info about him being a halfa while they are shell-shocked. So yeah, I think this was a really great two-shot overall. Could use minor improvements here and there (or course, no writing is perfect) but nothing major that bothered me enough that it needs to be mentioned here. Thank you for entertaining me; I immensely enjoyed this! I wish you happy writing in the future!

Starlin's Ghost
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