Great chap, can't wait for the next

Enjoying this so far, both the build-up of the plot and the characters themselves are interesting. I'm assuming Orchestra is the name of a gang (or something similar) they used to be part of? I look forward to reading all the future chapters :)

I very much enjoy this story. What hooked me was the realistic experience of hunting that sabre cat. Good Lordy, that was well written. Kai is great, and the continuing depth his character has shown is so well portrayed. I don't think he'll be annulling that marriage. She does really great things for him. Reina herself is cute and bubbly, the kind of person that makes the Thieves guild almost have a sense of honor.

Casair is lovely, Ivan is not quite as bitter as I would have expected, and Jovak comes across as fundamentally damaged. Something there is a bit loose, and it'll be interesting to find out how things went.

'Connie', though. I keep wondering what their take on the Blades is. Because there is definitely a link there between Ivan, Kai, and Connie. They also come across so real for a Nord hero. So very real. Great job, great work, keep up the well done story and keep the pace slow. It's doing great things.

dem references though! caught some Durarara! some Monogatari, and maybe even some SAO. And I know Orchestra is from something but I'm not quite sure, was it Jormungand? Anyway good story.

Haven't read your story in a while and now that I caught, shit hit the fan real quick! Didn't think you could fit that much chaos in two chapters lol, can't wait to see what happens next

can't...wait...

#f.r.i.e.n.d.s.

Antonio Amati? Nice touch...

kai will off himself one day i'm telling you

Casair: Tired girl is tired and right to be suspicious. Nothing is ever that easy...

Firo: "Again". Wow. XD Also, this will be interesting to see. Anyone else going after the dear queen, then?

Kai: Of-flipping-course. XDD And I just about died laughing at that scene. XD That was freaking hilarious!

Isran: *winces on behalf of Lokil*

Ivan: Aw, that was sweet.

Kai: Okay, when his head shot up I literally couldn't hold back laughter. I'm in the middle of a computer lab for cryin' out loud! XDD

*after the letter* Oh my gosh, I'm still dying. XDDDDD

DID HE FREAKING FLEE!? XDDD OH MY GOSH! XDDDD

Well where have you been sir?

Love your story so much, each of the characters are so unique and amazing, can't wait for the next chap

Dude... This was by far the best chapter you have written

Reina: Girl, you're up to something and I can't wait to see what you're planning. If it's gonna have Riften in an uproar, I hope it's a big plan. XDDD

Conrart: XDDD This guy's awesome. The trick was fun in its own right, yay for a party/festival, and lol for teasing friends. XDD

Omiq: *reads last sentence and snickers* Nice. Though I'm curious as to why that information didn't cost a single septim. Was the name truly worth that much?

Kai: interesting conversation, interesting conversation, INTERRUPTION OF A DAEDRA, interesting conversation. XDDD I found that incredibly amusing that he just interrupted like that. XD

And ouch... even though you only wrote Sinding for a brief passage, it's enough to feel for him...