gogo saying to hiro my real name is leiko

Oh my gosh. That was amazing. You HAVE to write more like this!

This was well-written. I liked it.

Really love the subtleties to this one, little details from the stickers and gum to Voltaire's superpowers help make that late-hitting grief really hit home in ways that fit in with the movie's theme and make Gogo all that much more relatable. Nicely done.

Ironic when you read this and you're just as tired as Go Go.

You're different. I like stories with references to other stories and events that happened but weren't written or played out. Like this is a chapter of one big story but without the big heavy hassle of a written work. Do you get that?

I like flashbacks where there aren't any needless narrative. Like it's how a flashback really should be, like you just picked up from somewhere and you know remembered. And again there's referencing without really referencing. If that makes sense.

I love your background running story. It's believable. Well paced and spaced. I like that, I really like that. And the voices of the characters were believable too. Not many get Gogo. They always make her overtly badass or aggressive. I like yours. She was aggressive but she made sense. Bc I mean cmon. Gogo is this mean harshly independent girl but she hugged Hiro right in that one scene in the movie? She got what Hiro wasn't saying bc she works on the unspoken subtle heavy things that float... Blah what am I saying.

Oh my heart... This was so NICE! The little flashbacks were great and I love how comfortable she ends up feeling with little hiro! x

That was amazing. The subtleties between Tadashi and Gogo (and maybe even between Hiro and Gogo?) are a great touch to this one-shot. The emotions were so real and in-character. I really liked how you wrote Gogo and Hiro (especially Hiro!)

Feel like this story could be taken as platonic or romantic. Anywho digging the tomadashi interactions and everyone actually.

I love the attention to detail!

Brilliant. *slow clapping*