Yeah I can connect with him
If you guys know me in real life then you'll know what I mean
I use to be cheerful too y'know
But it's just, never ever came to me anymore
I use to love pink
Now I prefer black
I use to the light and cute girl
Now I'm the dark and mysterious lady in the shadows
I would never tell people why
No one can know
NO ONE

Your Pai is really in character, you write very well :) this story reflects perfectly what I think his thoughts were during the anime. I love your stories :)

Cute and adorable ️

0that was AWESOME soo hi um... Im 11 years old and need a publesher I think YOU could be an AUTHER

Oh. My. Gods. Pai is so cute when it comes to Lettuce, and you capture his cool, distant attitude perfectly. Someone like him, who keeps everything hidden under the surface, is incredibly hard to write, and you somehow get inside his head and interpret what's going on in there. I can't wait to see how you continue this...it's already beautiful.
And, since this is my OTP and it's pretty rare to find them portrayed right, it's a good find.