Hello there! Sorry for asking here, but I thought it was fitting considering the question. Anyway, whatever happened to the third part you partially uploaded? Maybe even finished, I didn't keep track.

I read the first two installments in one go, but didn't get to the third one before it was removed. :(

So, just to get this clear. Shepard gets a message from a clearly mentally unstable person, meets the person with no backup to speak of, his cybernetics/augmentations don’t help whatsoever with the tranq(?), and he talks shit to people willing to torture him? Your Shepard has been consistently characterized, but I don’t understand this decision at all.

Awesome work dude.

While I had had a sinking feeling in my stomach this is how the trial would end up for some time, this still... hurt. Its painful to see her hurt this wayto go through that, especially with how well you have written this from her perspective.

A fantastic, emotionally-charged chapter. Spectacular writing

I just wanted to note that this entire take on Aite and the way you're writing Miranda's growth is spectacular. Incredibly organic. And a far-cry more impactful than her turnabout in ME2

YES

Love the way Kaiden played out here. I always felt like this part of the game lacked the emotional depth it needed, whether you were Paragon or Renegade.

i really like the attention you give thane, though i never paid much attention to him

I really like the garrus and chloe romance. haven't seen it before

TIM! ahhhhhhh

Finally ! Hahaha oh my god. just kill me with a bat..

beautiful

Epic Story you’re an amazing writer keep it up God bless.

Tali has a nice plump ass.

Amazing take on Mass Effect 2. But when is the third story being posted?