Dude, seriously, why don't you update this?

Hey! This cliff hanger is really getting to me my dude . Halp :)

Wow, cliffoe much? I love this story. Update again soon please!

Es una buena historia bastante fiel a los personajes pero estaría mejor con mas acción -

Nice! Keep going!

Good but pls PLS PLS! keep it up!

Plz don't abandon this story! I am seriously intrigued! It's a good story, so far! Btw if Ron does I'm gonna be p***ed! Plz continue! I'll be watching...

Fun chapter. Got a good ending. Needs work on the paragraphs. Looking forward to next chapter. Keep up the good work.

Good beginning to the story!

Nice chapter. Good use of humour. Looking forward to next chapter. Keep up the good work.

Good first chapter. The paragraphs at the end need work. Looking forward to next chapter. Keep up the good work.

always wanted Ron mystic martial arts master, ring tower of muscles, Drakken/Zorpox supergenius brains

Well, well, well, Motor Ed has seriously upped the baddie bar, seriously. What's a teen hero to do? Well she could—Wait a second?! Rufus can chew through solid steel. How come I'm the last to know of this amazing ability? Man, no one tells me anything!

You gotta love Motor Ed's crazy mellow, seriously. The guy knows how to live. Cars, mullet, cars, destruction... uh, cars? Yea, definitely cars!
Sometimes I wonder where super villains get their wall straps, gotta be a sale at some store at
some random, undisclosed location. Probably Canada... Yea, Canada sounds about right.