haha, good. Definitely good.

Please continue with the story. I really like it.

Please more updates, please! It is very comical, creative, and simply brilliant of a story!

Never mind, found the explanation. Yeesh, that was weird.

Excuse me? Da fuq? Unless I’m seeing Danny Fenton physical understanding this dog by mental communication, and not by “as if his gestures were like speaking”, I would love to fucking know how a dog would explain the entirety of the Pokémon universe like professor oak within the first game. Man, I’m letting this slide but if weird things that don’t make fucking sense happen then I’m out. Like how come the animals aren’t afraid at Danny? Wasn’t in the cannon animals don’t like Danny because of his half ghost?

Ok I read this fanfic all day yesterday and on midnight ended on this chapter.

Aaand my dreams was like: Danny's Houndoom was running around my neighbour houses and making 'F1 in race' noises. They were like 'WTF is happening'. Best dream ever xD

Whyyy would you put two flying types on a team though? They're both hella weak to ice...

Good fic otherwise, though.

Nice use of science

Holy heckin haystack you’re good at writing fight scenes, I absolutely love this story! The characters are well written and developed, and you have a wonderful sense of humor!

No seriously. What is going on!? Now the referee(from chapter 19) can understand pokémon as well!? What happened to people not being able to understand the pokémon language unless they were psychic or half ghost like danny?

Uummm... Are leo and the cop dude supposed to be able to understand the pokémon language? Because the last conversation they had in this chapter(#14) made it seem as though they could understand their pokémon perfectly. I thought only Danny or psychics could do that.

I stumbled upon this story today, and I will be reading it. Nice to see another author who is doing a crossover like this as well! (Yep, I have my own Pokemon/DP fanfic!) Now for my review:
I liked it, though I'd like to know the events that lead up to Danny ending up in the Pokemon World. The Houdour is charming and cute, and Danny is silly as always! I didn't think the Bagon were suicidal, but then again, I haven't read the Pokedex.
I will definately follow this, as it was a nice read :D

~LaRa

the tone of "don't wannaLeo did and ol pulled out marshmallows is totally like Byakuran from Katekyo Hitman Reborn

Ok, dos cosas, primero: me tomo dos días leer los 19 capítulos; segundo: este es el único crossover de pokemon y DP que me ha llamado la atención (felicidades).
Espero con ansias las próximas locuras XD

I've been wondering will there be a pairing in this