Reviews for A Vial Of Pheromones |
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Darkshadow-lord chapter 1 . 6/3 Great Story! I really enjoyed reading it! |
Alan Sanders chapter 1 . 8/15/2016 Perfect! Do more please. |
silverknight12 chapter 1 . 5/18/2015 love this one shot I have read quite a few times I love the not to much or to little attention to detail in the surroundings and the comedy situation and the moments between Soifon and the other woman Yoruichi included. |
Count Morningstar chapter 1 . 4/29/2015 Hi, sorry for not reviewing this story right away. I felt like I needed to think about what I wanted to say for some reason. This was quite the amusing one-shot. Nothing says comedy like having someone get accidentally dosed with chemicals. This story was a little bit too long though, in my opinion. Perhaps it would've been better if you had split it into a two-shot and have Yoruichi come to the rescue in the second half. Also, for some reason I would've liked to have seen Rukia fall under the influence of the pheromones. All in all though, you did a pretty good job. Keep up the good work. :) |
GaleAeras chapter 1 . 2/9/2015 This is good. I have only one problem with this, it's supposed to be petals , not peddles. |
Krazyfanfiction1 chapter 1 . 1/25/2015 while it isnt really deserving of its M rating, it was a nice fic keep up the good work |
Soi Yo chapter 1 . 1/23/2015 as always very good one shot, funny and a good ending. thanks for writing. |
FongShihouin chapter 1 . 1/23/2015 A nice story, btw, just me almost had a heart attack with soifon in the manga? |