Could have been great but Harry is such a wimp. Hermione hits him over and over and he does nothing. Narcissa has him wrapped around her finger an he does anything she wants. Both Andromeda and Druella use legill8mency on him, violating the most sacred thing a person has and no reaction.
Never mind that he is an abused child that should react very negatively to any kind oh physical abuse, he was also mind raped by Snape and Voldemort so should be vehemently against that as well. Also he has been controlled his whole life but when Narcissa does it there's no reaction.

she is what bella could have been oh well also when she was born you said she had blue eyes might want to fix that

Really enjoyed the story, thanks for sharing!

I was a little disappointed that Harry didn't have a male heir. Otherwise a decent story!

Good story

Unconventional couples are the best and this one works. Nicely done! I enjoyed the whole story.
I'm also glad we didn't get any of the ridiculous couples for ten years old readers JKR dumped on us in that awful epilogue. Gah!

Nice story.
The dialogs could use some ... rewriting, I am sorry to say: no human talks like this, not even a one with “word-vomiting“. The sentences are flowing into each other: there are no stops, breaks, the way of the characters thinking seem to wave rapidly (maybe as a consequence?)...
The story sometimes told - in past tense, sometimes happens in real time...: style could be decided.

Hi! I really really really loved this story! It's an unconventional pairing and I used to think that I was almost alone out there shipping strange couples... But here you are! I am so happy to have found your story! I hope to read more from you in the future!

very good story, every time I read stories that I really like when I get to the last chapter leaves me with the feeling of not knowing what to do next ...

I'm not even sure how many times I've read this. I am sure that every time is great and it is still one of my all time favorite HP stories

I loved this story, I hope you continue writing.

One of the best fics I've read. I just wish the epilogue would have been about more than just their child's school years.

I can think of one place Harry might be keeping his wand… after all Captain Jack Harkness kept a hold out blaster in his butt crack, just in case he needed to shoot someone after being declothed… and boy was it a good thing he had that blaster too!

Good God. I can't help but wonder if you're just a moron. It's wrong to have both of those tenses in your story. Yet you have the entirely illiterate idea to use them both in the same paragraph at time. Pick ONE. O N E. Either past or present, not both. Holy god.

I was right great chapter