Wow! I loved this story! Amazing work!

This was a wonderful story. You have a very real perspective in which you write your characters and it is delightfully charming and on point. Thanks for this!

First paragraph...I see what you did there. XD

The back thing made me smile since I think a good back and shoulders on a guy are one of the most attractive things about men.

"He wondered why humans didn't just greet each other by sniffing butts and then move on to the humping. Why did they complicate everything?" - Give humans time. It's already greet then hump, the butt sniffing will end up being some sort of fetish out there.

I loved this story. It was a entertaining read.

Nursemaid Riza to the rescue. I love the way you characterized the two in this fiction, it's so dead-on.

I was laughing out loud with the nurse and rectal thermometer talk. The moment you said "Armstrong in Drag" I knew who it was. I love the bickering between Roy and Havoc and the way you've characterized Riza. Great chapter.

This was lovely - very sweet. Great voices.

Thanks for this - exactly what I was looking for. It's so difficult to find Ray focused h/c at all, especially something so well written. Everyone was very much in character, and I love seeing Roy and Riza together. Perfection.

I love this so much! I did catch a few spelling/grammar mistakes that distracted me from the story, but other than that if was fantastic! The characterization was perfect and I can't wait to read more :)

That was fun to read! I did catch a few small grammatical/spelling errors here and there, but it was a very enjoyable story and you did well with the prompt. :)

I laughed too much with Amstrong's sister. The balance between the comical parts and the most serious ones made the reading very enjoyable (I'm not sure if I'm explaining well xD). Anyway, I really liked reading this and I hope you continue.
Have a nice day!