Okay. I’m not one to read reviews. But I did for this story, and from the looks of it. Some stuff I want happen and some stuff I don’t want to happen, happens. And the stuff I don’t want to happen is severe. So I loved the story, and wish it the best, but I’m out.

Please say that Yoruichi doesn’t get friendzoned. I want her happy with Ichigo, and I want to see him happy with both Yoruichi and Tia.

Heeeelll yeah forgot about this fic love it so much please finish this its amazing

I agree with TheAttemptedWriter and Kel000.

YOOOOOOOOOOO this fic is still on going. I thought I'd never find it again. Thanks for the update

Don’t get banned. I just binge read all of The Shark in the Moonless Sky and the revised Shark in the Moonless Night. I have to see how this ends. Keep up the good work. You’re a genius.

umm very confused ichigo found out about Isshin during his fight with aizen

does the Shiba clan not exist in this fic?

this was actually a decent climax for this kind of story very rare for these types of fics awesome stuff

doesn't he know that he's a noble?

Holy shit, a fanfic with a legit original plot, the apocalypse must be near. Jokes aside, this ones a lot better than the original, glad I didn't jump right into this one. As for shark and kitty sharing the strawberry, I almost find this set up believable. A week or so of angst between the three of them would have sold it better though. I probably missed this answer in a previous A/N but why'd you give up on sex scenes? Lazyness?

let him without sin cast the first stone noone can we are all sinnners in the eyes of god only jah can judge us

The shadows crap ruined the mood of the story.

All this angst is just plain annoying

hi again its been so long since iv got to read this fic an catch up on it an now ended up binging 25 chapters so far I just cant stop this is way better than the original I was so worried when you were gonna restart it that I put of reading this an now regret it cz this is a master piece only request I actually got is please add unohanna to the harem she would be the perfect balence they need an level headedness anyway cant wait for more an keep up the awesome work. by the way Tite kubo could get lessons by you on how to flesh characters out..

Truthfully I have to stop here. The story is an overall nice read, but there's several things I disagree with, both as a writer and as a fan of the series.

One, Zangetsu. Or I suppose I should say Hichigo. Within the canon he is Ichigos true zanpakuto, which is something that had been hinted at throughout the series, with the anime giving extra hints in his anime filler The Zanpakuto Rebellion, which you acknowledge as canon in this fics timeline. Throughout the story he is many things, and on the surface he seems like a potential antagonist to Ichigo. Except whenever he's needed him, he saved Ichigo. From Kenpachis killing blow, from Renjis, showing Ichigo a trick to properly wielding his false shikai, taking over for opponents Ichigo himself wasn't quite ready to beat yet (He was nowhere near ready for Grimmjow, and sense you acknowledge the bounts as canon too, he wasn't ready to fight one in just shikai.) There are several instances where he has taught and saved his wielder, while still keeping up the act of a maniac. In this story he's just, it's disgusting. He has calmed down a bit, but he's been made out to be some sort of rapist cunt, and it really just comes out as being written by a shitty writer. You SHOULD be better than that.

Two, more of a nitpick, but the hogyoku restoring Ichigos powers instantly for no reason and leaving Aizen to die. I have expected Aizen to appear in Ichigos mind at some point, due to the impersonations, but I have doubts at this point, and don't care to continue onwards to find out.

Three, Yoruichi. While she did tease Ichigo occasionally because she knew she could get an amusing reaction out of him, it's hard to say they were even very close. They didn't speak much outside of training, combat, or general serious scenarios. Yet in this story, she all of a sudden loves Ichigo when she is, mentally, somewhere in her 30's to 40's? That's just gross. If you let it be plain ole Tia, that would be more than enough, but you went for the fanfiction double ship omg much wow imma get so much love for this! Yet all it does is make Yoruichi look fucking odd, Tia look weak (In that she can't deal with the consequences of her actions and MUST have this man as her lover, instead of resolving things with Yoruichi in a sensible manner.) And as the characters have shown, it makes Ichigo look like a fucking shallow creep. Tia, understandable, but Yoruichi over fucking Rukia and Orihime? The logic for denying Rukia as a choice was a stretch, yet it's a bigger one to even try accepting Yoru.

Four, attempting to fit in more than necessary. And by this I mean all the subplots you have going on just by chapter 18. Let's review shall we?

Ichigo rebuilding the kido corps as it's new commander, Ichigo keeping Tia hidden, Ichigo going through the dark and oh so unjust history of the soul society, Ichigo making enemies with captains, Ichigo discovering the despair of the lower district's and wanting to try to do something about it, school life, relationships, the ancients (Which, seven banished ancients. I wonder. Seven deadly sins perhaps, but I'll touch on this more in a sec.) Ichigo being forced to be a captain, ichigo learning hollow powers, Tias past, yoruichis issues with her clan, Ichig- let's stop stop stop just fucking STOP. Every chapter we're bouncing the fuck around from this plot to this plot to this. If this was a much longer and much more detailed story this could all fit in far more naturally but holy shit there's so much bullshit to try and keep track of. Its insanely stupid. There's practically a new sub plot a chapter and its disgustingly hard to keep track of. You could've made this a much more quality and much more interesting story if it was just about Ichigo after the final battle trying to hide Tia and sort out his feelings for her. If he was also still losing his powers, so he ended up depending on her and she guarding him from all that may harm him while also attempting to help him regain his dying powers. That alone would have been good enough. But no! New villains! Love triangle? Make it a fucking love PENTAGON! Ichigo living his life? How bout magic instant fix and kido corps commander? Like you decided to add so much unnecessary drama and it's just a headache.

There's a few other nitpicks I have as well. The strength of these ancient beings, you act like they are so powerful but you have already contradicted their strength. It would take the weakest one a few hours to wipe out the soul society. Yamamotos bankai needs only a few minutes to do the same thing, and he was suppressing it the entire time. The entire dimension would've been destroyed by him in minutes if he went all out, so I ain't exactly threatened by the ancients. They can fuck off. And you make yama, even now, seem more harsh and unreasonable than he really is, when he has shown a softer side. Also, he recieved an order from the C46 he had to obey while HE was still the ruling body of the Soul Societ