Oh no! Hans is back and Agdar wants him to marry Elsa.. Oh, I really hate Agdar.. He is very stupid and ignorant.. He doesn't want to believe what Elsa and Anna said about the fiancé.. But I'm sure Anna will be able to stop the wedding..

Oh. My. This chapter... So amazing! I can't wait for more. Anna for the rescue! :) I really like that last sentence, very in-character. :)

I get that you have a limited update schedule. I mean, I do, too. This was well worth the wait, I assure you. I like Hans's reappearance. Tell me, why is Afgar being so villainous?

Sad but intriguing story, poor Elsa! It's so sweet how Anna is standing up for her!

This is FANTASTIC! End of chapter 2 is perfect time to make crossover, add Jack Frost... He will help elsa cope... They fall in love...and what do you know elsa has something(someone) to fight for. she Needs to break free!PLEASE KEEP GOING! :)

This is a fantastic idea! Please keep writing :)
This would be a great place to introduce a crossover...maybe ... Jack Frost, comes to her window and spends time with her.. Helps her cope she falls in love and that gives her something to fight for...I don't know . But it would be really cool! please keep going

...I feel sick. :(

And I mean that in a 'bravo for being able to do that' kind of way.

I need more. I need to know what happens. I need to know Elsa is okay... I want her to be happy again. (Agdar needs to die. For real this time. *deep sigh*)

Please write more.

Oh wow... This hurts my heart. Really, really badly. :(

I really love this story.. Please continue writing.. Please write about Anna's plan to stop Elsa's wedding and to stop the King from continuing locking Elsa in her room..

OMG now arranged marriage! And he just keeps locking her away in her room :) Aww poor Elsa! I love this though omg just through amazing stuff at you... I'd LOVE to read more! Especially about the arranged marriage! (Hans?) Ohhhhh this is soo cool though I'm left on the edge of my seat.

Awwwwwwwwwww this is sad about Elsa having to conceal her powers all over again! ELSA! It seems Elsa and Anna's lives are changing and just when Elsa's getting confident and beginning to be a good ruler! And I'll bet when King Adgar says about the Southern Isles and Wesleton saying about the events two years ago.. I just get the feeling Hans said something for revenge and the Duke of Weslton- Well he's just an annoying old guy right? Haha.
I loved the way you changed P.O.V's! It made it really interesting and give you a feel of how all the characters are feeling in the scene.
It's really well written! And I love the way you write :) It's engaging, captures your attention and the story line is sooooo cool but I'm kind of sad it's a one shot- Maybe another chapter? Please Its left me really wanting to read more because it's that good! ;)

Please have finally Anna confront her father for keeping the whole entire truth from her, okay?

Continue please! It's going really good!

I think you could really go far with this story. I just love the sisters' reactions to the new/old orders. By all means, keep this up!

I like it you should continue and add the queen