That was a mildly wild ride. It turned out a tad better than expected, so that's a plus. There gonna be another one?

I loved the dominatrix Pokemon comananding her trainer. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Great story, I think you should add another pokemon later on in the story.

nice

This is the second best fanfiction I have ever read. The writing was well done, the adorableness in the beginning, and (You don't see it often) the lemony part made SENSE. My only problem is that I want this to continue as an actual series! Please continue this!

Wow, that was a very good story one of the best I've read. Well done! :)

This was very well written just need to fix some formatting errors