Ah Shit, I knew something like this was going to happen. Romano now will need to figure out a way to knock some sense into our loveable idiot, or get risk getting caught and/or murdered by the demons. Lovely chapter; expected nothing less.

CRAP. ;;
So many things went wrong I can't even-

[heavy breathing] I didn't know I needed this badly until now. It's delightful.

America! Dude, really? Just listen to the Italian! :/

I can't believe how funny this is I love it! The writing is great and even without the set plot you mentioned, everything comes together nicely!

Oh Alfred...how I kinda wanna smack you for brushing it off. Be more cautious!(I have faith in you) great chapter! Poor lovi can't get a break with those nightmares and dirty dreams.

Found this fic and it's nicely written. I love how you wrote out their interactions. Man can't wait till the next chapter.

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Please.

When I checked my alerts I physically gasped when I saw that you had updated. I am sooooo happy that its finally up and everything. Although when I was reading I had a sudden urge to smack both Alfred and Romano upside the head for trying to make the crystal glow BEFORE they got out of the water, because then it would make it ten times harder to escape the mermaids. But any who, lovely description and awesome story telling. I hope you've gotten out of that terrible writers block with this out of the way.

I really liked this chapter!

Please tell me you are continuing this? It's too good to stop, especially with the build up of that huge foreshadowing in the last two lines.

Another great chapter, Thank you! The ending of it is also nice. You are very clever.

This is such a nice update, and that last bit is definitely thought-worthy!
I like how the world changed with the addition of the Golden Crystal.

A wonderful chapter!
Can't wait for the next!

This story is so wonderful and the concept is very interesting!
Can't wait for the next update :D