From your discriptions it sounds like you have caladbolg and hrunting visually swapped, caladbolg being the energy blasting spiral sword than thins as an arrow, while hruntign is that edgy helix broadsword than twists into a misshapen lance.

*saves energy by using crane wing three realm instead of a high rank noble phantasm*
*finishes the fleeing foe off with a broken A rank noblephantasm when a regular sword would do fine*

Dude.

this is very good so far, I'm very excited to see whats going to happen in this story

I can't wait Shirou show Unlimited Blade Work to the others.

Team arrangement is special, oh well. Story is good.

An interesting thought just popped into my head, It's generally believed that Od and Aura are the same thing, seeing as to how they are both defined, right? And Od, Is used as fuel for most magecraft, and Shiro doesn't have enough fuel for his reality marble, right? Well...Considering everyone in this Universe has a monstrous amount of it...is anyone thinking what I'm thinking?

PRANA EXCHANGE RITUAl! I Feel like it would work, so plz give a seen where shirou must save the world through sex.
That is all.

What about Winner.

Please update I want to read

please let me know if you will continue this story

could u pleez make it a single pairing at least?

Are you sure that this is not a harem because this definitely screams harem from the way he acts towards the girls or the girls act toward him, well not that I'm complaining XD

I want more

sólo, are you going to revive this story?

updateeeee... why you focus on fem persona,,,, if only you wrote a male protagonis ill read it.. damn, my luck is shit... suck real life, even my net life suck too,

okay