| Reviews for The Team |
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LoveWithAMonster chapter 1 . 10/26/2016 Wow, so you blame me that my stuff is childish it's kind of hard to keep reading. |
Guest825 chapter 1 . 6/6/2016 Nice, though a bit short. Hmm, Author's POV... |
RicJuan chapter 1 . 11/9/2015 -Sigh- Somber moment and it did helped us fans to ease into a new character after Lee/Frost's unexpected loss... Good read. |
RicJuan chapter 1 . 9/28/2015 -Sigh- Somber moment and it did helped us fans to ease into a new character after Lee/Frost's unexpected loss... |
Guest chapter 1 . 9/25/2015 Aww, Lee/Frost... Welcome Nina! |
Ms.K216 chapter 1 . 2/14/2015 I like the idea a lot. I think you should try and turn it into something with a little more reaction from the characters though. Maybe add some dialogue to show them meeting Nina or have Nina and Maura talking instead of just telling us they did. It's a great start though :) |
Jesse Gutierrez chapter 1 . 1/21/2015 You say your not a writer, that's hard to believe. It was a well written story, thank you for it. :-) |
nurse1 chapter 1 . 1/21/2015 no not nina they need another guy jane will get jealous trust me |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/20/2015 no girl that will cause friction between j &m they need a male maura one with a google mouth and quick computer skills no girl sorry |
Vincent52 chapter 1 . 1/20/2015 Nice. It gives Frost a loving memory, support for a new Detective, and reminds the team that they have to move on with life. Good job. |
crime fictiction chapter 1 . 1/20/2015 its good frosty will never be forgotten but they have to go on and be even better in his memory. |